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I never once thoughThis could happen to me
A hanging branch
On a semi-dead family tree.
I was the worthless apple
That had fallen.
Straight from my
Mother's wooden limb.
My father
Lets me leave.
Escape forever to the ground
Haunted by the hollow sound
Of a whispering wood.
He told me I was free
From growing up from the seed.
She told me I could be
Anything I wanted to be.
I guess seeing it now,
This wasn't how it was supposed to be.
'Cause I was young and too afraid
To be my own little sapling.
But the difference was made;
When I left,
The photosynthesis stopped
For a moment,
To reflect on another forgotten leaf.
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Comments: 6
glenninacrypt [2009-12-30 04:24:51 +0000 UTC]
Come on Steve, talk to me! I'm concerned about you! This post has a strange
tone about it. With lines like:
"I never once thought this could happen to me"...
"My father lets me leave".
"This wasn't how it was supposed to be".
"To reflect on another forgotten leaf".
"I was the worthless apple that had fallen".
" It's a hard knock life for a white suburban upper-middle class male".
Did you get into a big argument with your family during x-mas?
Were unkind things said to you by someone important to you?
You've been so quiet lately, and then this post shows up....
You're too great and important for me to ignore the "Tone" of this poem...
Or? Maybe I'm overacting again, and this is simply ART!
I may be old, but I've been through a lot of crapola and maybe I can
be of some help to you....some how....some way. I figure you're very
depressed. I know you don't like to talk much. You must know that I care!
Just knowing that someone like you is "out there", gives me hope for the
future and the World is a better place! Sorry for the "gushing", but, there
it is.
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ddrcoke21 In reply to glenninacrypt [2009-12-31 05:51:20 +0000 UTC]
I'm not depressed at all. I've been pretty busy the past few weeks, and something inspired me to write this. Everything is fine. [:
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glenninacrypt In reply to ddrcoke21 [2009-12-31 09:15:57 +0000 UTC]
Thanks Steve for putting me at ease! You had me going! It was ART! God, your good! I'll not overreact again...
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glenninacrypt [2009-12-29 14:35:41 +0000 UTC]
What?
Were you adopted?
Did you run away?
Did you just take off?
Were you kicked out?
Was this Irony?
What?
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glenninacrypt In reply to ddrcoke21 [2009-12-31 09:17:45 +0000 UTC]
I'm so glad!
I hope you got everything for X-mas...
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