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Published: 2009-05-01 04:12:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 57; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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It's offensive to take your loveWith absolute joy and care,
It's plastic and shiny
Metallic and polluted.
Listen to me above the crowd
Above yourself,
In the desert wasted.
I'm gonna make a speech
So listen very well.
I'm a triple threat with a threatening
Double-triple zero.
Zero in on scoping out and thinking
About about.
Bet you never made yourself
So beautiful
As you do right now.
How do you manage to manage you
Checking hair in the compacts
Every minutes minutes minutes.
Second on hand,
Second chance on the clock.
It's getting kind of cold out.
I can feel your heat.
Oh you're so attractive,
So dangerous, I'm impulsive.
Quick to think! quick to act.
Fear not for I am wonderful.
I'm a piano,
Play me like a fool.
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Comments: 6
EngagingRomance [2009-07-18 01:43:07 +0000 UTC]
I'm a flute.Blow me like a fool,HOLY CRAP THAT SONGS WRONG[;
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glenninacrypt [2009-05-01 04:50:12 +0000 UTC]
I'm a-scared to "Critique"! I'm NOT qualified at all!
But I like the part about the piano!
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ddrcoke21 In reply to glenninacrypt [2009-05-01 22:40:22 +0000 UTC]
Who's to say you're not qualified?
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glenninacrypt In reply to ddrcoke21 [2009-05-01 23:53:18 +0000 UTC]
Because I don't wright poetry...wish I did, but I don't. But I love it. What was it that Dudley Moore said in the movie, "Arthur"?......oh yeah;
"Some people don't drink because they're Poets.....And some of us drink because we aren't".....or some such thing. The late Dudley Moore played a drunk
in that movie. Now I don't drink, but I wish I "took after" my Grandpa who wrote and could recite all 100 verses from the old "Rubaiyat of Omar Khayy'am"
Poet of Persia! Wish I were like you! Besides, a lot stuff "flies" over my head, and I do NOT want to anger you and be "ripped-to-pieces" by
you're razor-sharp words! You show a lot of guts when you put that "Critique Requested" under your work! That's what I like best about you;
"You're NOT afraid of Shit"! You are beyond your years, Mr. Steve! Like I've said before: "When I grow-up;I wanna be like you, except with lots of cash"!
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glenninacrypt In reply to ddrcoke21 [2009-05-02 00:19:20 +0000 UTC]
WOW, That's good! "Slow to anger"! Something else to admire about you!.........But I'm still a-scared!
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