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ddrcoke21 — Not once.
Published: 2009-07-18 05:16:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 75; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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You may not notice much,but I am stronger than I ever was before.
I know you think I've just been standing
for what I'm standing for,
but I know that I'm not fighting for nothing.
I know that this is worth living for,
And that's more than you have already.
I'm letting you have this one chance
To make things right again.
I know that you won't take it though,
I just wish that you could show
Me how to live like you, so
I could get through a single day,
Without having to regret
My every notion and motion I make.
Thoughtless, careless,
I wish you would teach me to breathe
Like you,
So I can make it through the night
Without spending my seconds
Counting the minutes,
Down to the days where the
Hours turn months into years.
It's been so long already,
And I don't know where to start counting.
I can't close my eyes for a second,
'Cause then that moment's already gone.
I've got to live for
Everything I know,
And all that I know is that
I believe in all that you've ever done.
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Comments: 8
I feel kinda bad that no one, with the proper
qualifications, has given this artist (ddrcoke21)
a formal "critique" as requested! These "works"
deserve it! Especially this piece!
I think I know why! "ddrcoke21" is vary intimidating
when it comes to writing. It would be like a student
Giving a critique to the works of Frank Lloyd Wright
with the man himself standing nearby!
Or everyone's on vacation right now..........
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I've read this beauty over and over! It has the effect
of being composed like music. I think this piece proves
that You write way beyond your years! WOW!
Phrases like:.."where the hours turn months into years".
Geeeze! I can't possibly describe the longing feelings
this piece congers-up for me! I don't know how. The only
thing I know to say, in my simpleton way,
is this piece almost made me weep! No kidding!
I'd "Fave" this one, but Holly would give me crap for it!
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Your welcome! This one's an absolute Beauty!
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