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ddrcoke21 — So Eden Sank to Grief
Published: 2009-01-23 20:26:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 140; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description When dawn turns silvery gray,
Would Eden like to stay that way?
Should leaves fall from trees,
When the river that runs is green?
Nature's first bloom is gold,
And that hue may be hard to hold
But when you're making many mistakes
It's hard to say that all that glitters
Will forever stay.
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Comments: 5

aillesdors [2009-01-31 06:05:31 +0000 UTC]

Good retort! I love the line you picked for the title, too. The whole thing is quite Frostian.

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ddrcoke21 In reply to aillesdors [2009-01-31 06:59:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. [:

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aillesdors In reply to ddrcoke21 [2009-01-31 07:09:16 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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random-kumquats [2009-01-24 19:55:47 +0000 UTC]

nice job

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ddrcoke21 In reply to random-kumquats [2009-01-24 22:11:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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