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Published: 2009-01-29 22:32:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 87; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description Sure, my skeleton
Is barely listening
And I'm not hanging
Onto just anything.
I've got my head
Barely on my neck,
Beginning to break
Off my shoulders.
I've got my eyes
In my hands,
Because gravity
Pulls them further
Down, down.
Bones crack,
And I'm tapped
For all I've got.
And what I've got
Are a few extra limbs
Climbing out
And finally swear to me
That they win.
When my eyelids close,
The whole world knows
That I'm opposed
To the light that grows.
So I dream of tomorrow
And think of yesterday,
Looking back on the future
And reminiscent of the past.
No one lives without regrets
And that's why my dreams
Tend to haunt me.
And when I wake up
From my wretched realms,
My face is flushed
And my eyes are numb.
My hands on my face,
My nose on my thumb.
I yawn and stretch,
I wish the day was done.
Or at least, I wish
That I hadn't gone to sleep
At the time of one.
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Comments: 6

overoncloud9 [2009-01-30 20:59:02 +0000 UTC]

hmm. do u play sports? for some reason that's the frequency i was getting when u said 'that they win'.
nice use of line breaks.

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ddrcoke21 In reply to overoncloud9 [2009-01-30 22:30:16 +0000 UTC]

Nope, hate them. [:

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glenninacrypt [2009-01-30 01:21:28 +0000 UTC]

This is right up my alley! The hell you "don't know"
OH, YOU KNOW vary well !...
"looking back on the future
and reminiscent of the past."
"NO ONE lives without regrets
and that's why MY dreams
tend to haunt me....

Damn! these lines got me good!
"The whole thing is spot-on!"..."YOWIE!"
your NEW fan....

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ddrcoke21 In reply to glenninacrypt [2009-01-30 01:28:42 +0000 UTC]

I really don't know.
I just kind of write and post whatever comes out.

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glenninacrypt In reply to ddrcoke21 [2009-02-02 01:04:57 +0000 UTC]

All I can say: ddrcoke21 is "WOWIE-ZOWIE!"

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ddrcoke21 In reply to glenninacrypt [2009-02-02 05:02:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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