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Published: 2009-06-24 08:56:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 143; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 2
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ListenI know you're feeling
Out of your mind
Lately.
It's
Something normal
To feel, at a time like now.
You have that.
But, me.
Don't
You remember?
I just did. That time we
Were sitting on the rocks
By the fire, by the lake,
We talked
Tonight.
Your
Eyes were barely
Visible, through smoke
And flames and starry nights.
When you're next to me,
I get warmer
From that.
I know
It will never happen,
And I should drop my dreams
Right now. Even if I get crushed,
I'm used to it by now.
It doesn't count.
Ever.
My pillow
Smells like smoke,
Reminding me of you
Stained with the smell
And with your voice that
Sings a song.
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Comments: 15
Hmm in your last few writings you seem to be playing around a bit with different rhyme schemes. A sort of disjointed but related thoughts coming together to create a greater whole.
I likes it. Though I may be a tad biased as my thoughts come together in the same way.
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I write without thinking
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"I think I know, I don't think I know, I don't think I think I know....I don't think I think."
Is pretty much you're thought process eh? 
I likes it.
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*giggles quietly*
It's sort of the best way of describing spontaneous thought, eg: you writing without thinking. But meh, it's pretty none the less.
So if that wasn't it and you weren't playing with rhyme schemes is there in fact a method to your madness?
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Oooo he 'is' catching on.
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He is You, and You is the idea of yourself. And if I continue going on like this we'd be getting into the metaphysical and um... I'm bad at that, so in the interest of saving face I'll shut up now. :stuck:
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Also, ignore the smiley up there, its late and my fingers get steadily more stupid as the night wears on...so up yay me?
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