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Published: 2009-03-03 21:45:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 290; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 4
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Description They call that boy the wallflower.
He dances through the halls,
And he sees no one at all.
He stares through space in class,
And you can't hear him talk.
He leans against the walls,
And watches people pass.
He never makes a sound walking,
And he can hear your voices talking.
You'll never even notice him,
Unless you look around.
At home, he just sleeps
He dances, and draws,
He doesn't stop to eat,
Not for anything at all.
Wallflower boy lives in his own little world,
A world where he is all alone,
Where he dances and draws,
And nobody talks.
There's a soft pitter-patter
Of his toes on the stage.
He yells to the crowd, in fear,
"Loquacious students,
That gather in the halls,
Most of you haven't heard me talk.
But now with a gun,
You all shut up,
Because you're afraid of this metal.
I know more gossip than you ever will,
Because you pass me and not realize
That I'm standing at all.
You tell your secrets in front of me,
Because you realize I won't talk.
Well here I am, people,
With my lips moving and all."
He waves the gun around
At the people in the room,
Then holds it to his head.
Wallflower boy's petals fall off with a boom.
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Comments: 26

miss-Tao-Luath [2012-04-11 01:53:30 +0000 UTC]

I absolutely adore the last line. Tragically beautiful.

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RainNeverendingPain [2009-06-02 01:39:23 +0000 UTC]

i like this a lot

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ddrcoke21 In reply to RainNeverendingPain [2009-06-02 03:01:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.[:

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RainNeverendingPain In reply to ddrcoke21 [2009-06-02 03:53:52 +0000 UTC]

welcomee...its just so lovely (:

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glenninacrypt [2009-05-09 22:20:23 +0000 UTC]

I took another "look" at this poem......
I was wondering, Steve, was it autobiographical
In any way, sorta-kinda?

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ddrcoke21 In reply to glenninacrypt [2009-05-13 02:24:21 +0000 UTC]

Nope.

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glenninacrypt In reply to ddrcoke21 [2009-05-13 06:40:41 +0000 UTC]

Oh good. Just your fabulous imagination at work here!

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EngagingRomance [2009-03-19 01:36:23 +0000 UTC]

I love this<3

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EngagingRomance [2009-03-04 21:53:07 +0000 UTC]

This is my favorite poem of yours.

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glenninacrypt [2009-03-04 02:38:44 +0000 UTC]

How tragic!
This "took the wind right out of my sails"....
"DARK"!

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ddrcoke21 In reply to glenninacrypt [2009-03-04 20:45:34 +0000 UTC]

I like this one a lot.

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glenninacrypt In reply to ddrcoke21 [2009-03-06 04:05:00 +0000 UTC]

Hay, don't get me wrong!...It's good!
I like "Dark"....

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sfmdraw [2009-03-03 23:02:44 +0000 UTC]

This was really good!

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ddrcoke21 In reply to sfmdraw [2009-03-04 00:41:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. [:

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sfmdraw In reply to ddrcoke21 [2009-03-04 00:46:51 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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EngagingRomance [2009-03-03 21:50:02 +0000 UTC]

Um....
so im guessing he shoots him self..
if thats the case hes going to hell cause he commited suicide.
But if he didnt then thats just a sad story.

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ddrcoke21 In reply to EngagingRomance [2009-03-03 21:50:30 +0000 UTC]

LOL GOD.

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EngagingRomance In reply to ddrcoke21 [2009-03-03 21:51:48 +0000 UTC]

HES THE CLOSEST TO REAL AS REAL CAN BE!

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ddrcoke21 In reply to EngagingRomance [2009-03-03 21:52:43 +0000 UTC]

... No, that's atheism.

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EngagingRomance In reply to ddrcoke21 [2009-03-03 21:53:54 +0000 UTC]

No,thats yo momma.

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BrokenBoySoldier90 In reply to EngagingRomance [2009-03-04 19:49:29 +0000 UTC]

No, thats agnosticism.


Cool poem, bro

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ddrcoke21 In reply to BrokenBoySoldier90 [2009-03-18 21:41:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, but agnosticism is just atheism minus the understanding of the fact that there is no God.

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BrokenBoySoldier90 In reply to ddrcoke21 [2009-05-14 18:01:58 +0000 UTC]

Oh, thanks for telling me.

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ddrcoke21 In reply to BrokenBoySoldier90 [2009-05-14 19:24:05 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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BrokenBoySoldier90 In reply to ddrcoke21 [2009-05-15 17:49:04 +0000 UTC]

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EngagingRomance In reply to BrokenBoySoldier90 [2009-03-04 21:09:28 +0000 UTC]

ew

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