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ddrcoke21 — World War Ming
Published: 2009-06-02 03:03:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 139; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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So this is what you gave me,A world filled with warmth.
It's not the loving kind
Like the one in my sheets at night.
No, it's a hungry hot,
It's eating off the cold.
If hot and cold is unbalanced,
The world could even explode!
Your hometown is underwater
And your old work building, too.
I wish you could see the land
That you mistook for granted.
If it's not in your times,
It' not your problem.
Is that your philosophy?
'Cause it sure seems like it to me.
Is this your idea of philanthropy?
Just look at all the sea.
One degrees, or two, or five
It's a big difference under there.
I heard it kills a lot of fish
And someimtes polar bears.
Where will the penguins go to live?
Will Antarctica even survive?
Oh, wait, it's not your problem
Since you won't be alive.
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Comments: 4
This is a very powerful poem. I really like the imagery. Especially of the work building underwater.
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I'm sorry, Steve! That "one-word-comment" was too
"snippy"! This is the best written "description" of
the "Global-Warming" business I've ever read Anywhere!
And I'm not just "saying" that because I think
you're cool!............."In a poem, no less!"...
I've already told you how amazing you are and stuff!
I have run out of nice things to say! Systems Shutdown.....
I wish I were qualified to do the formal "Critique"
so that I could rip-it-to-pieces! Smash-it-to-bits!
And then remold it nearer to the hearts desire!
But how could I, when it's so very well done!
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