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Published: 2009-06-02 03:11:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 168; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Empty plains,Ponies in a ranch,
Cornflower blue skies,
Watercolor sunsets.
Wyoming,
Here I am.
Take me in your
q u i e t n e s s.
Away from all the city life,
No conformity,
Living where the sun is bright.
There's no smog
That covers your earth,
Nobody lives
In Wyoming;
So Wyoming,
Here I come.
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Comments: 8
Holly said
"OMG I DONT CARE THIS IS THE GAYEST POEM I EVER HEARD"
omg i think she's jealous
"OMG I HATE YOU"-holly.
"yyoure an asshole,shut up"-holly
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me too[; it was holly.
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Thank you for the response!
I really like how direct and to the point this piece is. You paint a very vivid picture in the reader's mind, and allow them to feel what it must be like to live in such a place. The short lines are effective for 'taking' the reader through the poem in a powerful, quick manner. The way you used spaces in, 'q u i e t n e s s.' is really cool, just because it made me stop and really take in what that must be like.
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This is just "flat-out" beautifully written!
Such a powerful image this creates my mind!
Quite an accomplishment for so few words!
However; if you think that Pennsylvania is "boring",
which is what you wrote somewhere, and you follow-
through with what your nice poem suggests: " Wyoming,
Here I come", Well?..........
"That poem" should make for a fascinating read!
Now I can relate to the idea of living somewhere
where there's no people. What's confusing to me is
that you're a "people-person"! So why would you want to
do that? Unless this is just art!"Been There-Done that"
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It's just art. I would never go to Wyoming.
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Yeah, that's what I suspected.
I've been through Wyoming! And I mean THROUGH it!.................I think I'd like Pennsylvania! From photos I've seen, it looks kinda like my area here
in Washington!
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