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Published: 2007-09-12 22:51:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 99; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description Cascading from the leaves
And dropping to the ground
So nimble, clear and calming that it hardly makes a sound
it flows down calming rivers
and makes all our plants grow
So you know it's always rain
and you know it can't be snow
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sandmanno3 [2007-09-12 22:59:29 +0000 UTC]

i really like the last line XD
the only criticism i can make is to elaborate a bit, but i like longish poems, so dont take me too seriously

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ddrfreak13 In reply to sandmanno3 [2007-09-13 01:15:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Also thank you for the criticism cuz I need some more skills for my writing! XD

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