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Published: 2009-07-30 03:23:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 266; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 6
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Description It starts out with the head,
as it's supposed to from birth
Simply a case that protects
The only thing I truly own:
my brain.

Let's face my face,
which is a canvas and vessel
for all those pesky emotions
and senses and lies, like
makeup and polite smiles.

Travel south to my neck,
My prized possession!
Because God knows
without it,
I'd surely lose my mind.

My prize is held up
by arms and shoulders
that relieve burdens
by giving hugs
and receiving tears.

But arms just save the best for last:
At the end sits the hands
that hold so much power:
to work, to write,
to touch.

My hands can guide you to my chest
that holds my heart, my life,
which is protected only by an ivory cage,
cynicism,
and two sexy tumors.

Below that sits the home
where my butterflies live
along with warm fuzzy feelings,
and the fuel
that allows me to be.

Let's move on to a place
with a lot of power.
It can make babies
and break men
and dole out pleasure and pain at will.

Plants have roots,
Why should humans be any different?
My legs and feet are my foundation
my mobility
everything I need.

My body:
Bag of blood and bones
of thoughts and hopes
of love and dreams
of life.
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Comments: 12

sciencegoddess26 [2009-08-04 04:23:22 +0000 UTC]

I like it. Structured, but you made each one its own, so it's not cliche. I love the sexy tumors part. I laughed out loud.

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ddrfreak573r In reply to sciencegoddess26 [2009-08-06 10:32:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Really, the only structure I kept was that each stanza is 5 lines. Otherwise, I just kinda did whatever. I love free verse. I'm glad I made you laugh!

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sciencegoddess26 In reply to ddrfreak573r [2009-08-06 20:16:53 +0000 UTC]

Well, I meant structure of the meaning.. the topics of the stanzas were structured. But I agree, free verse is wonderful.

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ddrfreak573r In reply to sciencegoddess26 [2009-08-07 05:31:00 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah, I did do it in order. I forgot about that.

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Flora-y-Fauna [2009-07-30 19:07:20 +0000 UTC]

I'm positive on the mental image of your body.

I'm just glad you're starting to see what I (and all of your close friends) do.
:]
You are so beautiful.
I'm glad you're staritng to believe it.

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ddrfreak573r In reply to Flora-y-Fauna [2009-07-31 01:19:21 +0000 UTC]

Aw, what a sweet comment! I think I'm going to copy and paste it in my diary so I can read it when I'm feeling down.

Thanks, love. <3 How are you enjoying your new home?

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Flora-y-Fauna In reply to ddrfreak573r [2009-07-31 23:14:01 +0000 UTC]

It's actually pretty nice here.
Aside from being with out a car, and the usual family stresses, it's all great for us here.

How about you?

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ddrfreak573r In reply to Flora-y-Fauna [2009-08-01 01:19:02 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad it's good for you guys!

Why don't you guys have a car?

My summer's been alright. I've been working a lot, but my summer job is finally over. So I basically have a month to just chill out, which I'm looking forward to.

You're going to Perimeter, right?

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Flora-y-Fauna In reply to ddrfreak573r [2009-08-01 14:16:24 +0000 UTC]

We dont' have the money to get the air intake fixed meaning it won't pass emissions.
And i'm looking at both perimeter and this place called gordon university in middle georgia.

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ddrfreak573r In reply to Flora-y-Fauna [2009-08-01 15:08:21 +0000 UTC]

Oh damn, I'm sorry. How are you guys managing?

Those sound good! Are you going to enter in the spring or take a year off, or what?

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Flora-y-Fauna In reply to ddrfreak573r [2009-08-01 19:18:39 +0000 UTC]

It's going okay. we're on food stamps, and working on paying for things with my step dad's severace pay.
stuffs tight, but we're making it work.

i want to start in the spring, and it looks like i'll be able to do so.
this much time off has already started to kick my ass.
i need to be busy again, and soon. :]

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ddrfreak573r In reply to Flora-y-Fauna [2009-08-02 03:09:46 +0000 UTC]

Yay food stamps! I ate really well on food stamps, actually. And at least you guys have some sort of money coming in.

I hope everything works out for you, college-wise!
I need to be busy too. I joined the Y to prevent myself from having a mental breakdown. It seems to be working so far.

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