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Published: 2008-01-09 09:03:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 96; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description Dear Diary:
I’ve finally done it! I’ve landed a job with the biggest pharmaceutical company in the entire country! All of my hard work has definitely paid off. Not only does the job provide all these great benefits, but I’m getting a decent salary as well…I never would have imagined I’d be making six figures right out of college! Oh diary, life is just wonderful right now. I’ve gotten my degree, I’ve gotten my dream job, and I’m supposedly working on “the most important assignment in the history of science.” They’ve got some pretty lofty ideas, eh? I don’t exactly know what the assignment is yet, but I suppose I’ll find out when I start tomorrow. I can’t wait!
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Comments: 10

thetricia [2008-01-11 20:07:59 +0000 UTC]

I like your idea. I don't really have anything else to critique until you actually get started, but in the meantime, no rush.

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sciencegoddess26 [2008-01-11 02:25:11 +0000 UTC]

ah, the short chapters again.

I see you've learned something ion mrs. dryden's class. 3rd person omniscient.

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ddrfreak573r In reply to sciencegoddess26 [2008-01-11 02:56:07 +0000 UTC]

psh. what i have learned is not worth the hell she puts us through.

(jk, her class is actually my favorite)

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sciencegoddess26 In reply to ddrfreak573r [2008-01-11 21:37:12 +0000 UTC]

I"m sure her class is not my favorite. it's like a "lite" version of AP stats. The whole... low grades, and I don't get what I"m doing wrong. And both teachers are wonderful people, despite their subjects.

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flammablezen [2008-01-10 03:31:20 +0000 UTC]

lol
the "ordinary success" story start. clever

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ddrfreak573r In reply to flammablezen [2008-01-10 03:34:07 +0000 UTC]

thank you. i thought so too.

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theklauz [2008-01-09 21:04:14 +0000 UTC]

I like the idea a lot, I was thinking you could possibly start off each chapter with a small journal entry like this... just as an idea, but I like what you have going.


Length is, of course, encouraged.

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ddrfreak573r In reply to theklauz [2008-01-09 22:14:30 +0000 UTC]

that is actually a really good idea, i might use that.
i know it can't be completely first person the whole time...so that might be a really good idea. thank you!

yes, i know, this will actually be novel length. but i JUST got this idea so i really don't have anything written yet and i'm still formulating ideas.

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NIHLSON [2008-01-09 20:31:18 +0000 UTC]

i like it...i was very confused about it at first, but i think i can see where you are heading with this.

will there be more entries and you will kind of detail this persons journey through this company and whatever happens to them...i am assuming some sociological or political issue?

i look forward to reading more...

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ddrfreak573r In reply to NIHLSON [2008-01-09 20:53:56 +0000 UTC]

the story will become progressively clearer as I write more, so don't worry.

this entry is written from the point of view of a young scientist. his role in the story will become evident very soon.

yes, this story is going to be science fiction meets religious dystopia, to give you an idea of where this is heading.

thanks for reading and friending me, i really appreciate it!

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