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ddrfreak573r — The Giver
Published: 2007-12-30 21:07:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 46; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description She gives and gives and gives,
Receiving nothing in return
(as expected)
But she can only give so much
Before giving her whole self away.
It’s coming now,
It’s coming very soon,
She’s near the end,
Only a little bit left to go, and-
She’s gone.
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Comments: 6

Flora-y-Fauna [2008-01-09 04:49:57 +0000 UTC]

i know you.
you are a lot more like me that i had thought...

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ddrfreak573r In reply to Flora-y-Fauna [2008-01-09 05:03:25 +0000 UTC]

i think we should become better friends. i'm serious. it's very rare that someone ACTUALLY understands me.

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flammablezen [2007-12-31 04:04:36 +0000 UTC]

you're talking about yourself.
you're referencing all the compassion you pour out
and then describing how you never feel any in return.
I'm sorry

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sciencegoddess26 [2007-12-30 21:49:01 +0000 UTC]

girl looking for love and acceptance, giving love and giving the best that she has, but not receiving that which she seeks?

or it could be a mother, but that's more of an afterthought, though it seems to fit even better.

am I way off?

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ddrfreak573r In reply to sciencegoddess26 [2007-12-31 03:01:48 +0000 UTC]

you have hit the nail on the head.
congratulations!

it could be a mother I suppose. but that's not how I wrote it. but hey, that's half the fun of poetry, isn't it? interpretations, i mean?

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sciencegoddess26 In reply to ddrfreak573r [2007-12-31 03:31:54 +0000 UTC]

woot! My brain's not as dead as I feared. at least, not all the time.

the mother thing was just an afterthought, and when I checked, it seemed to fit. It wasn't my real interpretation. I guess you could see it as a teacher as well, if you really tried, but seeing as it came from you...

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