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Published: 2008-05-17 00:04:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 166; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 1
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Description We are the young
We are the immortals
go go go
no end in sight
because there's no such thing
as death
higher higher higher
go ahead,
light your fire.
let it burn.
But, that is no burning bush.
This is for real this time.
It will burn,
it will disintegrate,
turn to ash.
Never to move again.
This party is over, my friend.
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Flora-y-Fauna [2008-05-17 05:38:52 +0000 UTC]

it seems similar to some of the things i write, yes. but it is surely yours.
i like the repetition *cough* *cough*

i also like the burning bush ref.
nice play on the lack of religious morality in modern youth.

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ddrfreak573r In reply to Flora-y-Fauna [2008-05-17 12:31:10 +0000 UTC]

well i think we tend to think on the same wavelength with a lot of things. i find myself trying to make sense of today's society a lot of the time and i find that same desire in your poetry.

the burning bush thing could be taken so many different ways, really. it could be interpreted as marijuana. it could also be interpreted as that we think we can just do whatever we want, burn, destroy, but it actually does have consequences. it's not just going to burn without destroying anything like our sense of invincibility leads us to believe.

i intended both ways.

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