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Billy Hatcher: Rise of Corvo [Incomplete Dark Raven]______________________________________________
---Sub-Chapter 1: Platform Seven
Rolly, Chick, Billy, and Bantam stood on the platform before the last bridgeway in hesitation. Bantam noticed Billy looking down at the ground, lost completely in thought. He walked over to Billy.
Bantam: *Puts hand on Billy's shoulder* What are you thinking about? Right now I mean.
Billy: *Looks at Bantam* What did Corvo do to me? I know I was with him for a while, but I don't know why.
Bantam: What do you remember?
Billy: Well Corvo got a hold of me. . . and then nothing. I was caught up by Corvo, blanked out, and woke up in the chicken elder's wings.
Bantam: From where you blanked out, Corvo used his magic and made you turn to their side. You said some messed up things and vanished. Then later on after we went to the den, You showed up and sent us all to the Sand Ruins where you attacked us because Corvo ordered you to. We beat you and had the chicken elders hold onto you while we dealt with Corvo. We stole his spear from him and tried to destroy it but it wouldn't break so Rolly got angry and stabbed Corvo with the spear. After Corvo disappeared, we broke the spear and you came back to us.
Billy: Did I do anything serious?
Bantam: Not really besides attack us.
Billy: I owe him.
Bantam looked at Billy and asked what he meant.
Billy: Corvo's not getting away this time. . . I owe him a beating for what he did to me!
Bantam: Okay. *turns and faces others* Now I'm psyched.
Billy led the way as he power walked across the last bridgeway taking them to the seventh platform. The last battlefield appeared to be like a flat plane of purple stained glass, only much stronger.
Billy: Come out Corvo! I know you're here!
Corvo rose out of the platform spearless and paused for a moment.
Corvo: You never fail to amuse me Hatcher, well done.
Billy: Shut it Corvo! I've defeated your crows and shadows, *puts hand on egg* You're finished.
Corvo: Who me?
Corvo began to laugh slowly with a dark tone.
Corvo: Perish the thought. . .
Corvo outstretched his hands to his sides and began to float high into the air. *snap!* Dark Raven emerged from beyond the tornado and landed on the platform with an incredible amount of force. Himself complete, but his armor as mere shadows, Dark Raven gripped his staff harder and jabbed the base on the ground.
Corvo: I hoped I would have more time to complete my master's armor but you wouldn't allow it! Still, the outcome wont be any different. . . We will rule over Morningland AND your world!
Corvo began to die, fading away into nothing to never come back again for the next 100 years. Everything before the seventh platform shattered into thousands of crystalline shards as the tornado surrounding the Crow's World came to an abrupt stop, revealing the human world below! The crystal battleground the kids stood on, floated in the air reflecting the sunset's light all around. Below was the beach, the kid's school, and homes with people below looking up.
Dark Raven: You took my son. . . *looks forward and angrily* You humiliated me! *Grabs a strong hold of his staff* SAY GOODBYE TO YOUR HOME CAUSE YOUR NEVER GOING TO SEE IT AGAIN!
Dark Raven created nine pools of saturated darkness which the kids cleaned up fast, making the crow leader pull back less of his magic than he had put out, Throwing him into shock.
Billy: Don't you ever learn!?
Dark Raven hissed at them and jabbed the base of his spear at the ground creating an array of beams which fired out of the ground, trailing all four of the kids. When the magic had exhausted itself, the bits of the stage it had gone by burst sharply upwards missing Bantam, but sending Rolly, Billy, and Chick up into the air. Dark Raven then created three shapes in the air that were shaped like the Crow's Symbol, and made them fire laser like beams at the kids in the air, sending them straight down impacting the ground below with great speed.
The crow leader was about to repeat his attack until Bantam struck Dark Raven several times with his egg. To get away, The raven floated to the opposite side of the field while Rolly, Billy, and Chick went back to their eggs.
Dark Raven lifted his spear up into the air, creating six orbs that shot up into the sky. Stuck in a pose, Dark Raven was being attacked by the kids until the six orbs he shot into the sky detonated into several blade-like shards. The hundreds of purple shards flew down stabbing all they touched including even the helmets of the chicken suits! After all the shards had scattered around, they turned into a heated vapor burning the four kids.
While Rolly, Chick, Billy, and Bantam were trying to cool themselves off, Dark Raven jumped up and slammed the platform making its cubes shoot up in a wave, sending the field into a chaotic mess. The kids impacted the floor on their hands and feet separated from their eggs.
Dark Raven: Had enough?
The kids all stumbled to get to their feet while replying, partially stuttering.
Chick: n, never.
Billy: I'm just getting. . . getting started.
Rolly, Chick, Bantam, and Billy got back up to their feet when Dark Raven fired more beams around from his staff striking Billy, Chick, and Bantam while Rolly anticipated the attack and lunged out of the way. She looked around to find her friends on the ground, but not in a critical condition. The crow leader then shot energy snakes at Rolly which followed her around with Rolly's every attempt to get away.
Rolly: Someone, Get up now!
Billy was on the ground wanting to get up to help Rolly but his legs wouldn't allow him to stand. The random strikes and various undesired flights took their toll on him. Billy heard the impact of the energy snakes as they hit Rolly just as he heard her cries for help. Then he saw Dark Raven forcing her closer and closer to the edge of the battlefield, floating at a potentially lethal height above the water.
Billy: Hey Dark Raven! *throws Cipher whistle*
The raven turned to face Billy and was hit in the face by Billy's whistle.
Billy: I'm not finished yet!
Chick and Rolly saw Billy and stood up too.
Bantam: Yeah!
Chick: This isn't something you can win!
Dark Raven: Hahahahaaaaa! Do we really have to do this again?
While the crow leader had his back turned to Rolly, Rolly struck him and ran to get to her friends. Dark Raven WAS about to strike her but she was too short for him to hit so quickly. The kids got to their eggs and went to attack Dark Raven when he shouted "Perish!" and made tall dark spikes shoot up out of the ground in a wave. To avoid getting hit, Billy used his egg to jump over the spikes and the others followed. Because the spikes were shadows just like the eggs, the eggs didn't take any damage so when the kids were back on the ground, they were able to reclaim their eggs and proceed with their attack.
Before they could reach Dark Raven, he quickly floated to the opposite side of the field and let his staff sink into the ground. When the staff rose back up, it was eight bladed rods that spread out to the edges of the battle field and circled around. They eventually started to slash through the platform to get to the other side until they began to attack only Billy.
Billy: Don't worry about me, just break him!
Bantam was on it because he was already attacking Dark Raven who didn't have his staff with him. The raven called the pieces of his spear to his hands and then he started making dark meteor-like shadows crash down onto the battlefield. The kids tried to dodge the meteors but they were too fast for them. The shaded masses kept on hitting the kids while going through their eggs without destroying them. Then Dark Raven made his spear break up into 16 bladed spears which attacked everyone except for Billy who Dark Raven had already planned on singling out for an attack. Dark Raven dashed at Billy and kept on trying to punch him but Billy kept on blocking. He kept his arms crossed and moved them around to keep the crow leader from hitting him. While Dark Raven kept on trying to hit Billy, Billy was trying to figure out what to do.
*flashback*
(Last battle with Dark Raven on his own)
The legendary Chicken suit came down from above in an egg which shattered making three red, blue, and yellow lights circle around Billy. He was back in the Chicken suit that he had just lost.
Menie-Funie: You must fight!
The shadow raven looked at Billy and began to fire orbs of darkness at Billy. Catching it, Billy used his power to change the orb into one of light which he threw at the raven, destroying it!
*end of flashback*
Billy looked around and saw the four shadow eggs around the platform. He knew what to do but because he turned away from Dark Raven, the raven dealt a sharp blow to Billy's face, disorienting him. Billy ran toward an egg, partially unsure that he was going in the right direction until he finally got to one.
Dark Raven: Why are you running Billy boy!
Billy stood there focusing every bit of his focus, strength, and will power at that one egg but nothing was happening. Dark Raven pulled back the sixteen pieces of his staff to his hands and walked up to Billy while pointing his staff at him.
Dark Raven: So, you have given up already?
Billy did absolutely nothing to reply to Dark Raven which bothered the crow leader very deeply.
Dark Raven: YOU WILL FACE ME WHEN I DESTROY YOU!
Dark Raven then floated to the front of Billy and saw Billy standing still, eyes closed with his hands on the shadow egg. This confused him.
Dark Raven: I see. . . *points his staff at Billy* You would perish with that egg? Made of the very thing that you despise? YOU ARE AN IDIOT!
The Raven Fired a shot at Billy which upon impact was absorbed by Billy and the dark egg.
Dark Raven: WHAT!?
Billy shouted "LIGHT!" at the top of his voice. The egg obeyed Billy's command and shone with a blinding white-yellow light as Billy grabbed hold of the light egg!
Billy: You. . . *looks Corvo in the eyes* are finished!
Billy threw the egg at Dark Raven which completely addled him. Billy Then approached the next egg while Dark Raven was stunned.
Billy: Hold him off!
The kids ran forward and attempted to restrain Dark Raven but failed miserably as Dark Raven was to strong.
Dark Raven: *flying to Billy* YOU PEST!
Billy did the same thing with a different egg as Dark Raven was flying at him. Then, Billy threw the egg, this time hitting Dark Raven in the face!
Billy moved on to the next egg and Dark Raven once again Darted at him except this time he strafed left at the last second, knowing Billy would throw another light egg at him.
Dark Raven: You really think I'd fall for that again!
Rolly came up from behind with the light egg and smashed it into Dark Raven.
Billy: *running away* I wasn't trying to hit you!
Dark Raven: ENOUGH!
Dark Raven hit the ground creating a shockwave that sent the last egg falling off the edge of the battlefield. Then he laughed and sent energy snakes at all four of the kids. Rolly and Bantam crossed paths making the energy snakes chasing them, crash into each other. Billy and Chick kept being chased by the energy snakes until Dark Raven sent a trail of beams chasing after them, one after the other. The beams destroyed the energy snakes chasing Billy and Chick but kept on course to try and catch up to them while they ran. Chick then randomly shouted "I'll be right back!"
Chick vanished leaving Billy, Rolly, and Bantam on their own to face the beams which exploded striking all three of them onto the ground.
Rolly: Where the heck did Chick go!?
Billy and Bantam got up
Billy: I don't know!
Bantam: How did he leave like that!?
Then the Wing Emblem crossed their minds but they didn't mention it out in front of Dark Raven. The crow leader kept casting magic and the kids kept on dodging whatever they could.
Dark Raven: Your friend knew your defeat was inevitable so he abandoned you. Shows what kind of a friend he is now doesn't it!
Billy: I'd watch it if I were you!
Dark Raven: Is that a threat? You forget! You can't attack, your down a person, and you can't run forever! Perhaps I should end this right now?
Rolly looked up and noticed Chick and the Cipher incoming.
Rolly: THERE!
Everyone including Dark Raven looked at both of them while Chick descended from above kicking Dark Raven in the face! Dark Raven was about to get a revenge shot at Chick until a fireball from the Cipher landed right next to Dark Raven's feet. The Cipher who was flying down towards Dark Raven, started casting fireballs down at the crow leader while Dark Raven Casted some shadow meteors at the Cipher as well. Fireballs met with some shadow meteors destroying both while some meteors came close to striking the Cipher, and some of the fireballs came close to hitting Dark Raven. The Cipher moved all around dodging the incoming shadows while Dark Raven was moving out of the way of the fireballs while blocking some with his staff while casting shadows at the same time. It didn't take long for the Cipher to get close and when it did, it used all it's power in making one extremely large fireball which flew into Dark Raven destroying both him AND the platform the kids stood on! The Platform shattered into thousands of little pieces allowing gravity to pull the kids down. They fell separated from each other over the water screaming in terror because of the drop. When they all landed in the water, they were all safe except Billy was nowhere to be seen.
Rolly: BILLY! WHERE ARE YOU!
Bantam: ohno ohno ohno ohno ohno ohno!
Change of views: Rolly, Chick, Bantam ---> Billy
Billy was deep underwater, so deep in fact that no one would be able to find and rescue him, so instead. . . Billy was saving himself. He looked towards the light of the surface of the water and imagined taking a deep breath. "one, two, one, two." He moved his legs back and forth while moving his arms together to help move himself up. He was moving slowly towards the surface of the water, but it was something.
Up above. . .
Rolly, Chick, and Bantam looked around in silence not knowing where Billy was until he came up above the water just barely.
Bantam: He's over there!
Rolly, Chick, and Bantam quickly began to swim over to Billy as he tried to swim forward, sinking with every forward paddle.
Chick: You need to learn how to swim Billy.
Billy suddenly began to sink into the water when Bantam grabbed his arm and held him above the surface. Chick then pulled out the wing emblem and everyone touched it taking them back to the sand ruin in Morningland.
---Sub-Chapter 2: This fight is over
When the kids arrived in front of the Sand ruins, Ura-Ura was standing around alone waiting for the kids to show up.
Ura-Ura: Oh my, *approaches the kids* I'm glad to see your safe! The other elders are back at the den. *pulls out wing emblem* You should head over.
Ura-Ura left in a flash and Chick began to speak.
Chick: Man, does EVERYONE have a wing emblem?
Billy: Well, Ponee could have just given him, hers.
Chick's face went to shock and he shouted "OH, I FORGOT SOMETHING!" then he used his wing emblem to teleport somewhere.
Change of views Rolly, Billy, and Bantam ---> Chick
Chick had teleported back to their world by the sea side to find the Cipher standing there, surrounded by curious people.
Chick: *runs up and touches wing emblem to Cipher* Sorry, gotta go, bye! *teleports both*
everyone was baffled when Chick and the Cipher were just gone without a trace.
All: O.o;
Random Person: Chick!?
Chick met back up with his friends in front of the sand ruins and let the Cipher go on its way.
Chick: We should probably go to the den. The other elders have probably been waiting for us too.
The others touched the wing emblem and went over in front of the den where all the Chicken elders and a majority of the chicks and chickens in Forest Village were. Instantly upon their arrival, everyone was celebrating because Dark Corvo and Dark Raven were gone. The afternoon fell quickly and eventually, the time for Billy, Rolly, Chick, and Bantam to go home came around. Getting ready, they lined up side by side waiting until Rolly looked down at the ground. Billy saw this and knew exactly what was going through her mind.
Oma-Oma: Before you go. . .
Oma-Oma walked up to the kids with his hands behind his back and began to speak again.
Oma-Oma: You have all done so much for our world, risking your lives for us all. We'd all like to give you these as a symbol of our gratitude. *reveals what he was hiding behind his back*
Oma-Oma had four Wing Emblems in his outstretched wings and passed them to Rolly, Billy, Chick, and Bantam. Rolly's eyes lit up when she realized what the gift intended and hugged Oma-Oma and the other Elders. Rolly, Chick, and Bantam did the same and thanked them as well.
Soon after saying their goodbyes, Chick thought about their world and teleported, then Bantam, and finally Billy. Rolly stayed a bit longer looking around until she finally went back too.
"They heard. . ."
---Sub-Chapter 3: Home again
The kids were back in the corner of the locker rooms where they first left for Morningland. They started to head for the main doors while taking to each other.
Chick: I just realized something, We didn't walk.
Billy: What do you mean?
Chick: We left BEFORE the ceremony started like three or four weeks ago. Doesn't matter though, we're still going to middle school, ceremony or not.
Bantam: We are going to have a very difficult time explaining to our parents, why we were gone for so long.
Billy: Not worried about it though.
Rolly: Yeah.
Right before they were about to exit the doors of the school, it occurred to them that they were still in the chicken suits.
Chick: I think we were supposed to give the suits back. . .
Billy: Hold on, be right back.
Billy used his wing emblem to teleport to the chicken elders and then he came back.
Billy: They said we could hold onto them for a while.
Rolly: Yay!
She started to hug herself with the furry suit while they left the school.
They continued chatting about random things until they met the fork in the road, forcing them to split up to get to their houses. "bye"
They split and walked alone the rest of their way home knowing what they would surely do tomorrow.
---Sub-Chapter 4: The end is never really the end.
The next day. . .
The kids went back to Morningland to hang around and have fun. Exploring the areas they hadn't been to, doing the things they hadn't gotten to do yet. The children spent the day under the sunlight, in the peace and serenity known as Morningland.
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Comments: 16
BHGAMER [2017-06-12 15:56:20 +0000 UTC]
I am working on my own fan fiction for Billy Hatcher right now. It is called Billy Hatcher the Sequel: Return of the Chosen One. I have been reading to my brother as I get it done and he likes it, A LOT. And he thinks I'm stupid for liking the video game in the first place.
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BHGAMER [2017-06-12 15:51:15 +0000 UTC]
That was awesome! And thank you for having an ending to it. I read another story on this topic once, and it was not finished. And it was written is 2012! I am working on finishing my self though.
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ddrmaxman In reply to nintenchris5963 [2013-05-24 05:48:28 +0000 UTC]
I keep thinking I'd be able to start right away, but what I didn't realize was that it wouldn't be some small project I originally pictured it would be. This would be an all-out movie. I'm still hoping I'll develop all the skills necessary to make this fan-movie, but it'll still take a long while. :<
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BHGAMER In reply to ddrmaxman [2017-06-01 16:01:25 +0000 UTC]
This WOULD make a great movie!
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bh55 [2010-12-13 23:21:52 +0000 UTC]
I really like the story and I read on one of your journals that you would do the voices and that didn't go well. So, I have an idea for your Billy Hatcher animation project. The idea for you is to start the voice auditions for those who are interested in your project in the area you're living in now or maybe somewhere else. After all, I'd really like to see Billy, as well as the other characters speak for the first time. I wish you would use that idea but hey, that's up to you, not me. Also, I'm a big fan of Billy Hatcher
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ddrmaxman In reply to bh55 [2010-12-13 23:55:09 +0000 UTC]
I would except that people where I live are total A-holes so. . . No one but me knows what I'm working on, Well except for some girl who helped me get the sfx.
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LevelInfinitum [2010-12-08 09:45:32 +0000 UTC]
This was an excellent story.
I can't wait to see the animation storyline.
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ddrmaxman In reply to NaturisticLeafy [2010-12-08 08:09:26 +0000 UTC]
were you being sarcastic? lol
Not sure if you mean the whole Cipher thing or the reference to Chapter 8. Or maybe the fact that Billy actually swims. . . (The emoticon at he end baffles me)
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NaturisticLeafy In reply to ddrmaxman [2010-12-08 08:21:34 +0000 UTC]
No..i really think it was epic XD
i mean it all...well..i didnt know Billy could swim...*coughwishhewouldinthegamecough* and i ment to do : o..but dA messed up do it seems like a scared face D:
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ddrmaxman In reply to NaturisticLeafy [2010-12-08 08:39:32 +0000 UTC]
Billy can't swim but he forced himself too. It falls under the category of "will to survive".
-Side thing, I added the alternate beginning for chapter 1 of this story. Too bad I thought of it way too late. XD
You can find it here: [link]
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NaturisticLeafy In reply to ddrmaxman [2010-12-08 10:59:07 +0000 UTC]
Ahh
Lul...It looks cool XD
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