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Published: 2009-03-17 22:57:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 829; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 0
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Model:Photographer: Me
Camera: Minolta XG-1
Lens: Minolta MD 50mm with Rokinon Skylight 1A Filter
Film: ILFORD HP5 ASA 400
Location: UCV
I'm currently checking out some old film photos trying to get the development right this time and fixing scanning errors in PS
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Jejeje apenas me bastó ver ese patrón hexagonal para pensar... "hey! esto fue tomado en la UCV!" Y al ver la descripción... pues confirmé que así fue...
Interesante composición. Me gusta como la silueta se vé practicamente negra y con pocos detalles, contrastando con la luz que proviene de los agujeritos en forma de hexágono. Y los tonos en blanco y negro en verdad le van bien, resaltan más el juego de luces. 
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Very cool. Awesome shot, the background's super amazingful. Nice work!
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What a great photo! So dramatic! You picked a wonderful setting for it and I feel you got the most out of it with the strong black and white, and the combination of the model's contemplative pose in silhouette and the hexagons in the background.
First a bit of a nitpick, on my monitor I can see quite a few coloured artefacts on the model, which is a little bit distracting; though thinking about it this may be because you used dA's image resizing to produce the web version, so I'll let you off that 
I think the main thing I would do though would be to experiment with the cropping of this; I feel like there is a bit too much space on the left hand side of the image and that it's distracting me from the main focus, which is the girl and where she's looking. I just had a quick go at it myself in photoshop, and I chopped off about a centimetre from the left edge and it looked better to me.
Overall though a very cool image, thank you for sharing
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Woah! now that's a critique @@ thanks a lot! you made my day
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Great photo, was this one of the photographs you were trying to get developed right?
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Yup, well, not exacly developed since you can devealop film twice XD I needed to post-process it better since the digitalized version got severily scratched, added unexisting color and blowed up the whites...
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I really need to figure out what this post-processing is, it seems to be a required skill.
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Not actually required but certanly usefull to get the most out of raw files, look for tutorials about adobe camerera raw and that type of things on youtube or something, It's not really hard and you get pretty usefull things from it
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