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Deamond-89 β Essence of Time 4
Published: 2007-12-02 19:18:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 3000; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 48
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YAY!! Page 4!! xD It was so much fun designing this and the next page!! x3 Can't wait to read the comments of those who don't know Ifrit on the next page!!! xDxDxDAnyway, new page up, next page to come soon, EoT belongs to
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Der Schatten ΓΌbertΓΌncht die Augen etwas zu sehr..aber immerhin, die sommersprossen sind noch zu sehen XD
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xD Es soll... geheimnisvoll wirken 
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oh man, cool! the character designs are great, i must keep reading!
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Yay! Keep reading!! xD
lol
Thanks!! ^^
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yaay .. *open the next one* .. u r doing great job .. XD
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xD Thanks ^.^ Glad you like it!
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I read the 5th one before this one! @_@ xDD Oh man...anyway I won't expect Ifrit to have that kind of reaction in 5th one...when he looks serious here @_@
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xD thought of it as a nice way to present him ^^
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wow very nice I love it. alittle bit creepy but cool!
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Thanks!! 
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I guess I'll comment on what you have so far here.
It's looking pretty nice so far. I really like the architecture of the city you have on pages 1 and 2. Very well done. Also, I'm so glad you do wings correctly. You have no idea how much it irks me when I see a really well-done piece with "triangle wings."
One little point of critique: When you use gradients in the foreground like in the first panel here, they can be kind of distracting or look out of place. They totally work in panel 2, but I think it's because it makes the characters' figures more stark in contrast. Just a thought, take it as you may.
Overall, though, it looks like something I could pick up at a manga store (if there were any around here 
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Thanks!! And yes I know what you mean... there are people out there that have amazing drawingskills but cant draw wings with a passion 
Thanks for the advice!! Ill take a closer look at it again! 
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I love how you do the shadows and shading, the Manga it self looks fantastic and how you done each scene is perfect, keep it up, ok?
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I think he should be attacked from behind, then he does this awesome fight move or something o-o.... xD
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xD HEY! WE ARE TALKING ABOUT IFRIT, NOT ABOUT CALLO!! xDxDxD lol
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O_o *forgot what she wrote to make you reply like this*... *looks* ....aah... xDDD
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xD You said it would be cool if there was a sudden attack or something like this xD If he tried to stab Ledah.... anything like this, but might be that I missunderstood that xD
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yeah, xD I know hence the "*looks* ....aah... xDDD" xDD, Ledah obviously isn't as talented as Callo ( just like Ledah: Chrome - Callo: Karlai o-o xDD)
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xD Yeah youre right xD But I thought you mean Ifrit and Callo xD looooooooool (A sudden attack from IFRIT!?! 
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tis very confusing o-o.... *stomach rumbles*.. hm..
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xD Okay, tomake things clear again:
In the first post I thought you thought that Ifrit was going to make a sudden attack on Ledah. I really wondered and said that thing with Ifrit is not Callo xD Then we discussed and you said that Callo/Ledah is like Karlai/Chrome and I now thought you were thinking from the very beginning that it was Ledah who attacked xD And now I'm completly confused
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ok, I thought ifrit was going to attack Ledah, and then Ledah do some awesome fighting move back, then you said its Ifrit not Callo, I know Callo is a skilled swordsmaster, and so I thought you meant Ledah is no where near as good with fights as Callo - which makes sence? o-O
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xD Guess both doesnt make sense xDxDxD loooooooooooool But now its a bit more clear
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Me neither xD lol
Thanks! ^^
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Luckily I decide to 
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lol Yes, thank you!
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xDxDxD YOUWILLSEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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This is coming along nicely, I love all the detail in the second panel, it looks great!
Oh Ifrit, what are you up to? I have a few guesses towards what he's going to do, but I'll have to wait to find out. I look forward to the next page!
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xD Ooooooooh yes! Just curious: What are your guesses?? =3
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I think he's going to do something silly, like hug him XD or maybe even one of those "WELCOME!" scenes with a banner and confetti, something along the lines of that.
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xD Yes, really close!! xD Oh my, why didnt you tell me about that bannerthing earlier!?! xD loooooooooool
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Ahhhh you're putting up pages faster than me! XC
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And?? I'm not coloring them!!
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Oh right 
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xD loool But your coloring is great!
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. . . why do I have a feeling something is gonna happen?
Kaisui: Because it ALWAYS does. . .
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nice. you improved in your manga. i want to read more when it was ready.
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Thank you!! ^-^ Hope the next page will be up by tomorrow >:3
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