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that's jake.I don't even know what happened here.
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Falling-Skyward In reply to DeathPixels [2013-05-21 17:56:36 +0000 UTC]
okay love c:
1) The eyes are a bit too small. Aside from that, they way they are drawn is lovely, just try to increase their size a bit so it looks more proportional to the face.
2) The hoodie needs to be shaded a tad more. While you shaded just fine, if you look at an actual hoodie, they have more creases and deeper shades.
3) Finally, the skin isn't shaded dark enough. Underneath the jaw/chin and the nares of the nose should be shaded a lot darker since there is more depth. (:
Hope that helps dear~
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DeathPixels In reply to Falling-Skyward [2013-05-21 19:28:40 +0000 UTC]
Fun thing is, about the shading, I actually know that. ;u; but actually, I didn't even wanted to make this painting at all. :U
But about the eyes, lol I know. I make that mistake on EVERY single drawing.
Always the eyes too small ;u;
I'm actually always very carful with shading the skin cause I'm always afraid it's too dark ;3;
I need to learn to get out of my comfort zones haha.
but thank you <3
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Falling-Skyward In reply to DeathPixels [2013-05-21 19:34:06 +0000 UTC]
not a problem dear (: glad i could help. going outside your comfort zone is how we grow, always remember that!
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DeathPixels In reply to Falling-Skyward [2013-05-21 19:46:15 +0000 UTC]
I know <3
I've already come far in 3 years time.
And I'm always happy with critique cause I can learn from it and use the hints for the next time ;u;
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Falling-Skyward In reply to DeathPixels [2013-05-21 22:48:30 +0000 UTC]
Of course! I remember when I first watched you; You've come a long way since then. And I'm glad to hear that, it's good to build from it.(:
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