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Published: 2014-06-13 21:39:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 1190; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 0
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hi, i hope you don't mind if i give you some constructive feedback.
The model
the character looks quite good but has a few points that can be improved. first his muzzle, it looks little off.
i'm quite impressed with the eye's i never get them to look good, so good job.
second, the ridges on his neck. i know that they are there in the movie poster but the look weird to me. IMO he would look better without them.
his hind upper-leg looks a bit strange, (did you use a subsurface modifier).
there is a strange fold around the base of his tail. (might be a problem with the normal's).
The material
the texture of his skin, belly plates and wing looks a bit bland. (i don't know if this is a placeholder, if so then you can ignore this part)
form the render i guess you used the blender internal rendering engine rather than cycles rendering engine.
it might be a bit (or a lot) harder to understand but it makes the models look a lot better.
some tips
correct me if i'm wrong but i think you model this in a external program and then imported it into blender, with is fine by itself but if you make the model in blender it it smooth's out a lot of problems down the line
here is a video sire that helped me make models (especially dragons)
link
and if you want to make a better texture here is a video that shows what the cycles engine can do. (it helped me a lot)
link
please know this feedback is to help you and not shoot you down. i can see that you put a lot of work in this and that is Awsome!
take what you want from this but dont take it to sirusly. and keep it fun!
-Basbr
edit: the link's seem to be broken, its fixed now
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Beautiful work on Spyro! I noticed you updated your Spyro model, he looks great! Now THAT is the Spyro I was looking for!
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Thank you, I want to do the same as the movie poster
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NICE!! You did an awesome job, gives me inspiration ;D. You and metakirby have been working quite a bit on everything so i think i should get other people to volunteer for certain jobs and things, so everything will run smoother because right now im failing ^^'
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keep your courage, it is not going surrendering his project X)
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Tkx and you also do very well as well your model
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Waaaaait If I voice Spyro... then that would mean... *runs to get mic*
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Somebody working on the voice of spyro
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