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They always choose the hard way

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'The Wicked Dandy'

Chapter n°1: 'vs The Spark Maiden'

Page n°5

-> deep-world.deviantart.com/jour… <-
"Since I'm really far from having a completely satisfying English speaking and earing level I'll ask you to
tell me for each page if you spot an error/mistake/lapse or if you have a suggestion concerning the
text/dialog or (more importantly) onomatopoeia."


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Comments: 14

Parasyte123 [2023-05-01 19:09:18 +0000 UTC]

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firepiro [2015-07-01 20:22:06 +0000 UTC]

are you going to finish it

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Deep-world In reply to firepiro [2015-07-01 22:55:48 +0000 UTC]

Are you aware that new pages have been added recently ?

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firepiro In reply to Deep-world [2015-07-01 23:42:04 +0000 UTC]

no I didn't know can you show me where please

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sgtcortez14 [2014-03-25 05:23:31 +0000 UTC]

ask for ideas if you dont have any for an scenario

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DonDevious [2014-03-24 01:25:54 +0000 UTC]

I like this story, but its been 2 years, so I guess you don't plan to do more

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Deep-world In reply to DonDevious [2014-03-24 10:19:46 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. This also has bothered me since.
To be honnest I've actually lost the rest of the scenario since then

But I guess I could come up with something for here...

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striderxxx [2012-08-29 15:32:02 +0000 UTC]

still waiting for more awesome chapters.

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Deep-world In reply to striderxxx [2012-09-01 22:28:10 +0000 UTC]

Sorry.

Soon but not yet. :/

( [link] )

Thanks for your interest though, really appreciated

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striderxxx [2012-07-19 15:25:56 +0000 UTC]

i like her expression of negative.

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Deep-world In reply to striderxxx [2012-07-20 10:20:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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cresent34 [2012-07-18 21:43:34 +0000 UTC]

I just know this isn't going to end well for Sparky..

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Deep-world In reply to cresent34 [2012-07-20 10:20:36 +0000 UTC]

You feel it too?

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cresent34 In reply to Deep-world [2012-07-20 12:54:12 +0000 UTC]

Let's just say I've read enough of these things to know how this is going to go down, even if the details are a bit of guesswork.

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