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deepinsidemyself — Question With No Easy Answer
Published: 2003-06-26 06:12:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 95; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 10
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Question With No Easy AnswerYour words upset me
As do your actions
Your touch burns
Like red hot embers
You say you want me so bad that it hurts
But there is another
Another has your heart
And I do not
Are you playing with me?
Is it all just a game?
Or are your words true,
Like my love for you?
Trust is a factor
That all must have
You have failed your first
Will you fail me?
Am I just a pong
In your chess game
To do with as you please
You better not lie to me
Don’t play with my emotions
It will hurt to bad
If you don’t mean it
Then don’t tell me you do
There is too much
For us as friends to lose
But I will do as I will
And that is a promise to you
Don’t get my hopes up
And then back out on me
Don’t get me emotions stirred
And shoot me down to the ground
I am doing this
For it is what I feel
Its the feeling deep in my heart
And yes its real
There is so much love that I have for you
I don’t want to lose what I have
I don’t want things to change
And our friendship to end
I think I am done here
I have my message out
So now you know
What will you do now?
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Comments: 3
very good poem, i think i know who it's about to, but i won't say any more since i don't know if you want them to know who you where thinking about with this one.
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How'd I miss this one.
Watch the spelling: pong->pawn.
Constructive criticism: try and reach for fresh phrasing.
Avoid cliches and worn expressions.
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