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DefeatedThoughts — Falling again
Published: 2007-08-16 19:48:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 195; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 1
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Description Tears run down my face
as i sit here in this place.
your running through my mind,
like you do all the time.
my love for you is so hard to define.
do you think you could read between the lines?
that's right im calling you amazing.
what now, i say your captivating.
I miss you more than ever.
i find myself far from clever.
for falling in love again, when i said i would never.
but cleverness put aside
my feelings for you i cannot hide.
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Comments: 11

BrooklynNight [2007-09-16 17:12:08 +0000 UTC]

you say everything sucks when it's actually really good. Love your writing

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DefeatedThoughts In reply to BrooklynNight [2007-09-16 17:43:51 +0000 UTC]

gah i know i say everything sucks. cause i think it does. it's just everyone else that loves it lol.

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BrooklynNight In reply to DefeatedThoughts [2007-09-17 00:07:22 +0000 UTC]

Haha well don't. Because your writing is amazing.

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DefeatedThoughts In reply to BrooklynNight [2007-09-29 03:26:49 +0000 UTC]

thanks. . man i havent been on here in forever!...i have to go through over 600 deviations. lol. it's not possible. it'll take me forever lol.

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sexc-blonde-angel [2007-08-18 23:29:35 +0000 UTC]

OMG i love dis I can totally relate! its beautiful!

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DefeatedThoughts In reply to sexc-blonde-angel [2007-08-19 03:30:19 +0000 UTC]

thanks! . i appreciate it. im glad someone can relate as well. =/

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sexc-blonde-angel In reply to DefeatedThoughts [2007-08-19 10:28:43 +0000 UTC]

pleasure yeah I know exactly what u mean

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ShadesXOfXGray [2007-08-17 15:31:24 +0000 UTC]

I love it!

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On-The-Sidelines [2007-08-17 09:32:01 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful

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DefeatedThoughts In reply to On-The-Sidelines [2007-08-17 14:15:54 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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On-The-Sidelines In reply to DefeatedThoughts [2007-08-17 17:59:22 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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