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Any improvement? I think I have had some!!!Related content
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The shapes have improved, I think- she looks more dynamic and less stiff in your new drawing. The coloring actually looks more solid in the 2011 version but that's because of the lack of shading in the 2014 one.
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True! I'll add a shading to that for a better comparison!
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Awesome! I can definitely see improvement! Β Your line art has improved and it's gotten more realistic. Curious that you stopped shading though. That would really add depth to the 'after.' Either way, nice job! Can't wait to see you even further down the road!
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I shall add a shading to the new one for better comparison!
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I can definitly see the improvement!Β
The design and details are a lot better!
Especially the wrinkles!
And the pose looks amazing!
Such a great improvement!
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Anatomy I can see has improved, as well as the shaping in general 
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There is definitely improvement here. Your artistic style looks like it has come to be your own, and youβve really improved on the way youβve done clothes and wrinkles. 
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Thank you!! It's always important for an artist to find a style that's their own!
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Wow! This really illustrates how dramatically your style changed for the better. Please keep up the good work and post new stuff as much as you can please X3!
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Thank you!! I'll really try to post as much as I can!
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Oh, I can sure see improvement, Your anatomy has gotten way better, and the character herself looks more unique . Your line art is smoother, and softer, over all, it's a lot more pleasing to look at. She is no longer bulky, and her outfit moves with her, and doesn't look glued on, good work. Keep on improving!
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Thank you so much! I'll definitely be trying to improve more and more each day!!
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yes, I can tell the difference, you've really improved
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Thanks!! And yes, I did rid of the shading because I think I just hadn't had time to finish, but maybe in the future I'll add shading!
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She seems taller and thinner and it seems you down-graded the colors(shading). But there is change but I don't know if its good or bad...
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Well, in the last one I think I was making her too realistic, but in the second I made her more stylized and didn't shade her
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Some people like realistic and some others like stylized. I prefer stylized at times.
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I like this improvement: the change in style is apparent but not overly obvious. You've kept true to the old piece of art while adding a whole new level of quality to it, especially in terms of anatomy!
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Thank you!! That actually exactly what I was going for xD
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You really have improved a lot! I really notice how you've gotten a much better feel for proportions and angles--the way the body compares to itself. You also seem to have gained an understanding of fabrics--how they work and how to make them look good--and it's really admirable! Keep it up!
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Thank you!!! I remember drawing that back forever ago, thinking it was the best thing EVERβ¦its a disgrace now xD I love drawing clothing now! The folds, and how gravity and movement affects them! It's really fun to experiment with!
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Very nice improvement!Β
I like the design of the eyes and the boots on the 'before' picture, more than I do on the after picture,but thats just my personal opinion.
I like her outfit, The red and white works well together, and her tattoo(?) from what I can see looks pretty unique too! Good job!
I notice you haven't shaded the 'after' picture at all. I think it would look better if you had, and perhaps you should add more texture to the hair? I think that the eyes would be improved with shading and lightsource, also.
Her outfit looks very unique, and I know thats a pretty difficult thing to do with so many people with Naruto OC's, so great job!
I think her shorts could do with a zip or a seam at the crotch as well.
Overall I think you have definitely improved! Everything seems to be in proportion and you've created a lovely looking character!Β
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Thank you for all the feedback!! I really was debating on the boots, but the eyes just happen to fit my new style better. I think I might shade the drawing, but its mainly for colour reference for anyone who wishes to draw her or for commissions. I do agree with you about adding detail to her hair. I think thats what was missing every time I look at it.Β
And thanks for the outfit compliment!! It look me absolutely forever to think of one no one else had already done. She's gone through two other outfits as well >.< But I like this one the best by far.Β
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You're welcome!Β
I haven't seen to many unique looking characters, especially for a fandom as big as Naruto~ But she is really cute and unique!
Thats just what I prefer personally, If you like it then thats all that matters! <3
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Thanks once again! I know what you mean though about the unoriginal looking characters. A lot look like copies of canon characters, or the style is UNCANNILY same. I tried to stray from that and just create what I thought to be different but still cute and Naruto-plausible.
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