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Eternal-Shadow-S [2019-02-03 15:41:10 +0000 UTC]

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Pretty good pic you've done here! Lines have a nice stylistic boldness to it, with some being slim and others being thicker in some areas. Overall anatomy of the head looks on point, and the use of thin lines for the hair helps give a more delicate and flexible feel, compared to the rest of the image which has a stronger and more firm shape, so points to that. 

The colors themselves are pretty good, casually blending with one another. I didn't quite notice the scar on his upper left brow, but it looks pretty good as well, showing off a real tear off the skin. It's not a bloody or gruesome scar, but it does show damage to the body. 

If I did have one thing I need to point out, it would have to be the teeth. It stands out quite a bit. The line that divides lower and upper part of the teeth is there, but I would very much suggest, having continued that line. Even with that line in place, it almost looks as if his teeth were all one, or the inside of his mouth were all white. So, I personally think it would be best if the line was drawn all the way to complete the detail.

Overall, it's a good piece. Good job! 

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SheepyWolf [2019-02-02 15:21:55 +0000 UTC]

Hi, I'm from ProjectComment !
First of all, I do really like how you drew the shape hair! It's very well thought out and very well done. Another thing that I like is how you drew the ear! It does give off a very evil feel to it. You also seem to have good anatomy from what I'm able to see, so that's really good! One thing I would work on, however, is in fact the hair's shading and lighting. You seem to have put a lot of effort into the way you made the hair appear. Nothing wrong with that, however you seem to have taken it to a bit of extreme, and you didn't put as much effort into the rest of the demon's body. I also noticed that the hair doesn't actually have black line art. If I were you, I would just use black line art or no line art for the whole piece It gives off a more professional, and well thought-out feel to the picture to have a straight color for line art.
The second thing that makes me a bit confused is the eyes and eyebrows. Like the hair, you put in a ton of effort into the eyes. Nothing wrong with that, but you seem to have put a bit too much into the eye's pupil. It gives me, at least, a very unfocused feel to the drawing. You should try adding shading on the top part of the eye. This'll make it seem a bit more realistic and give the piece a better feel to it.
The final thing is the shading. I can't really tell where it's coming from. It mainly seems to be the right side of the demon but then again, the hair shine really contradicts that. Try to look at how shadows fall in real life and study how shadows are affected by light.
One of my absolute favorite things is how you colored! I zoomed in and saw no white lines--nice job on that!! Remember, you can only improve--keep drawing uwu

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Endiria [2019-01-29 16:55:06 +0000 UTC]

Very nice art!

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