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deisel89 — Dear Legash
Published: 2006-05-13 02:28:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 267; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 11
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In the beginning when I first "met" you,I could see you were in pain.
And thus I offerred comfort...
I didn't even know your name.
And as I got to know you,
With every word you said,
I sympathized, and tried to fix you...
But I broke myself instead.
I lost my heart to you slowly,
With every lie you told,
And now that I know the truth,
My heart is simply cold.
But finally! The TRUTH!!!
Away with all the lies!
And now my soul cries 'injustice!'
But my heart...it merely cries.
This drives me into madness.
My blood begins to seethe.
My eyes refuse to focus.
My lungs refuse to breathe.
How could I be so stupid?
So blind to your deceipt.
All along, I should have known
That you were just a little cheat.
But before I go...I say 'congrats',
For at least this much is true:
You broke my heart into little pieces...
Just like SHE did to you.
Comments: 16
As Yuffy said, this is brilliant. If only it happened under just mere inspiration and not suffering, neh?
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yeah, that would have been nice
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Lovely how u just wrote as if u werent thinking but u have to had been thinking critically to write this. I wont say i feel ur pain cuz i dunno what happened but tis a much repeated hated feeling
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well i dont kno what happened. one minute i'm in tears...n the next minute i'm in tears will a pen in ma hand. 10 minutes later....voila!
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i gotchya, ..nothing special, just something u felt like doing
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yeah. pretty much just wrote what i felt. hmm...apparenly all my poetry is depressing
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O.O
fucking brilliant...but unfortunate r the circumstances of the inspiration...
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oh no. i dont want ANYONE to feel my pain. i would never wish this on anybody. but thanks. love u Tyni
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U should never even feel your pain. But you're welcome
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