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Published: 2006-09-15 19:01:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 190; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description Hatred. So intense,
It sparkled in their eyes.
It reflected in their actions.
It echoed in their cries.

They bound her, beat her, broke her.
The smiled at her. Deceased.
They stared at her cadaver.
They waited, pounced, then...
"FEAST!"

They gathered what was left of her,
Buried her in the ground.
They gave her quite a ceremony,
Complete with absent sound.

They found a big ole tombstone...
And covered it in faeces.
Then they left a message:
R.I.P:
Rest In Pieces.
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Comments: 16

False-Like-Tv [2006-09-16 02:53:12 +0000 UTC]

humans amaze me to no fucking end.

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deisel89 In reply to False-Like-Tv [2008-01-14 17:14:47 +0000 UTC]

i kno

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yanic [2006-09-15 23:43:51 +0000 UTC]

wow nice ive had that feeling too many times thaks for reminding me!!!! lol just playing

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deisel89 In reply to yanic [2006-09-16 00:58:48 +0000 UTC]

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yanic In reply to deisel89 [2006-09-16 01:25:25 +0000 UTC]

hahha come on i was playing

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NOLOMOS [2006-09-15 23:42:25 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful. What Ash said.

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deisel89 In reply to NOLOMOS [2006-09-16 01:04:23 +0000 UTC]

thanks ya

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Ashley-Cristina [2006-09-15 22:59:04 +0000 UTC]

Incredible.. Really got my attention. You already know that I think you write the most captivating poems.

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deisel89 In reply to Ashley-Cristina [2006-09-16 01:03:59 +0000 UTC]

thanks a lot Ash

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Ashley-Cristina In reply to deisel89 [2006-09-16 01:25:10 +0000 UTC]

Of course!

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CSmellie [2006-09-15 19:44:04 +0000 UTC]

heh, they will get there just desserts my love

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deisel89 In reply to CSmellie [2006-09-16 01:03:33 +0000 UTC]

u can be such a weirdo

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CSmellie In reply to deisel89 [2006-09-16 01:31:18 +0000 UTC]

lol i know

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CSmellie In reply to CSmellie [2006-09-16 14:27:16 +0000 UTC]

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Gothicluva [2006-09-15 19:14:40 +0000 UTC]

i lurv this poem... it reminds me of how im fellin now

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deisel89 In reply to Gothicluva [2006-09-16 01:00:15 +0000 UTC]

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