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Published: 2006-08-10 07:31:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 267; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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It's funny how the words change,how their meanings fade to dust.
Funny how we forget things.
Example : the word 'trust'.
Words, they just deceive us.
They bring FOOD to THIRSTY souls.
But worry not, my darling,
For they will take their tole.
This word : el. oh. vee. ee.
The most deceptive of them all.
They say it is uplifting...
So why's it called a fall?
Oh, but I've been falling...
Into a vat of toxic lies.
And the poison overcomes me,
It silences my cries.
Hear that? It sounds broken.
What a tragedy to see.
Not to worry...Life goes on...
Crawling on its knees.
But let me end my babbling.
Foolish thoughts from an empty mind.
But I leave you with this message :
Watch your words...for they're unkind.
Comments: 15
CSmellie [2006-08-10 19:29:19 +0000 UTC]
...well umm... its cool and all,i guess i know what it means but pfft
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Smirnoffalicious [2006-08-10 16:38:26 +0000 UTC]
this is so sexy!!! and damn str8! love love love
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False-Like-Tv [2006-08-10 14:45:46 +0000 UTC]
gah you rhyme better than me...
[excellent work].
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deisel89 In reply to False-Like-Tv [2006-08-10 17:01:37 +0000 UTC]
lol. but u write better stuff than me. the only thing i'm capable of is getting a job with Dr. Seuss
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False-Like-Tv In reply to deisel89 [2006-08-10 17:07:12 +0000 UTC]
WHAT?? i applied so many times...
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NOLOMOS [2006-08-10 08:31:43 +0000 UTC]
I swear you are one of the best rhymers I know. I love this poem a lot. I've always wondered why it's been called a fall...
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NOLOMOS In reply to deisel89 [2006-08-11 03:28:01 +0000 UTC]
don't say that d. you will find love. just you watch
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