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Published: 2006-08-10 07:31:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 267; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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Description It's funny how the words change,
how their meanings fade to dust.
Funny how we forget things.
Example : the word 'trust'.

Words, they just deceive us.
They bring FOOD to THIRSTY souls.
But worry not, my darling,
For they will take their tole.

This word : el. oh. vee. ee.
The most deceptive of them all.
They say it is uplifting...
So why's it called a fall?

Oh, but I've been falling...
Into a vat of toxic lies.
And the poison overcomes me,
It silences my cries.

Hear that? It sounds broken.
What a tragedy to see.
Not to worry...Life goes on...
Crawling on its knees.

But let me end my babbling.
Foolish thoughts from an empty mind.
But I leave you with this message :
Watch your words...for they're unkind.
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Comments: 15

epsilon-server [2007-01-08 15:20:14 +0000 UTC]

Hmm...

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Legash [2006-08-11 01:50:59 +0000 UTC]

kewl poem!

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deisel89 In reply to Legash [2006-08-11 04:55:32 +0000 UTC]

thanks much

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CSmellie [2006-08-10 19:29:19 +0000 UTC]

...well umm... its cool and all,i guess i know what it means but pfft

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deisel89 In reply to CSmellie [2008-01-14 17:17:31 +0000 UTC]

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Smirnoffalicious [2006-08-10 16:38:26 +0000 UTC]

this is so sexy!!! and damn str8! love love love

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deisel89 In reply to Smirnoffalicious [2006-08-10 17:00:12 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much!!!

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Smirnoffalicious In reply to deisel89 [2006-08-10 17:01:16 +0000 UTC]

welcome my love

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False-Like-Tv [2006-08-10 14:45:46 +0000 UTC]

gah you rhyme better than me...



[excellent work].

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deisel89 In reply to False-Like-Tv [2006-08-10 17:01:37 +0000 UTC]

lol. but u write better stuff than me. the only thing i'm capable of is getting a job with Dr. Seuss

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False-Like-Tv In reply to deisel89 [2006-08-10 17:07:12 +0000 UTC]

WHAT?? i applied so many times...

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deisel89 In reply to False-Like-Tv [2006-08-10 17:19:54 +0000 UTC]

sorry dude.

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NOLOMOS [2006-08-10 08:31:43 +0000 UTC]

I swear you are one of the best rhymers I know. I love this poem a lot. I've always wondered why it's been called a fall...

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deisel89 In reply to NOLOMOS [2006-08-10 17:03:32 +0000 UTC]

cuz love is evol! aka evil

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NOLOMOS In reply to deisel89 [2006-08-11 03:28:01 +0000 UTC]

don't say that d. you will find love. just you watch

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