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Published: 2005-08-17 04:18:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 21905; Favourites: 1152; Downloads: 2772
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EDIT: watermark addedPLEASE READ BEFORE COMMENTING!!!! THANK YOU ^^
I would like you to help me improve, that's why I'm encouraging critique... not that I'm gonna fix the pic, because I like it this way, but I'd like to know what should I do better next time... so if you have a lil time to point out some mistakes and some things that could be improved, please tell me ^^ Oh, and could you please not be too harsh when doing so =X?
Thankies in advance
!!!BTW, I know Heiderich's arms are too long
And I know Aru looks quite girly >o<... maybe I made his eyes too big O_o;... (both are boys, in case you can't tell )-------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Yay! I wrote an actual title for the image! go me!! XDD
After watching some fanarts of Heiderich here and there, and a certain pic by ~waterlilly , and after getting a certain suggestion at the FMA LC comm, and after hearing a friend of mine squealing over everything related to Aru....... Somehow I ended having the URGE to draw Alphonse Heiderich and Aru together.... so yeah. I'm gonna draw something with Heiderich alone later...
Dunno why, but Aru didn't look that much like a girl when I sketched the pic O_o..... It seems that every time I draw him, he turns out looking more girly >o<..... oh, and BTW I don't know how much taller is Hei than Aru, so I might have made Aru a lil bit short
;;...I'm quite happy with this pic =3 It's been a long time since I CGed something qith love, care and dedication, without wanting to finish it asap and rushing it in the end, as usual. I also tried to color this pic differently ^^ And I like the result a lot!
WIP screenshot is in my scraps gallery in case you wanna see...
Tools used: Genius WizardPen tablet, Photoshop CS. Brushes were used for background.
Time spent: no. idea. Maybe 6 hours...
Alphonse Elric and Alphonse Heiderich (c) Hiromu Arakawa, Square-enix, BONES, etc...
Art (c) Dejichan.
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but the eyes are sooo cute! The best Al Hei pic I've seen so far!
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OMG!!! XD I love it!!!
This reminds me of Shanonen Ai!!!!
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the background is amazing, as is the picture. I don't really see mistakes, except from the big eyes, but that's not so bad.
Good job on this :+fav+!
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Awww, so cute! 
I can't take it it's too cute!! *dies of cuteness*
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opps.... i sent two comments... oh well... it just spreads the luv more.
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I luv this pic. Both Alphonse Elric and Alfonse Heiderich have my luv.
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I luv it. Especially Heiderich. But both Alphonse Elric and Alfonse Heiderich have my love!!!
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Wow, such a meaningful picture! I'd seen this before on another site, and I was happy to discover the original here.
I love the pose you've put the two Als in - it really highlights how much they look alike, and yet how they look very different. Al H.'s arms wrapped around Al E. begs for many different interpretations; I see it as protective and encouraging. Perhaps it means that Al H. lives on through Al E...
I also like how the red coat spreads out at the bottom of the picture. The tatters compliment the gothic-style font of the first part of the caption.
As for other critique, well, I'm not sure what I could say that hasn't already been said or that you haven't already pointed out. I agree that perhaps you made Al E.'s eyes a wee bit big. Also, Al E.'s hands look kinda like white lumps on top of Al H.'s arm; perhaps a little more definition for the fingers?
Besides that, I really can't think of anything more to critique. This is a beautiful image, one that provokes lots of thought and interpretation. Great job!
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Ahh~...
The two lovable Al's...Ohb yess...
-w-
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Alphonse and Alphonse lol its adorable *adds 2 favs*
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Amazing. 
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beautiful job! you have a great style. Keep it up!
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*u*....I've been blinded by awesome...As for being a critique...I can't think of anything 8O
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deji, I LOVE IT! Seriously, I do. I think they make a good pairing. Could you do me a favor?
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Yeah I agree do my sis a favor please.
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waaaaaaaaay better then I could do, I love the colouring and the drawin, awsome!
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I really think this is well drawn and colored and stuff. But for some reason I don't really like the picture itself.......I don't know why.......
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i like the way aru looks. i really like his eyes.
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no..no..no! its cooly as it is chi! its lovely im gonna fav it heehee
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Oh wow! I've finnally found you! ^^ I've been searching for the person who made this picture for a long time! I found this picture at a different site the person must of removed the water mark... Well anyway I love this picture and all my friends love it too, but, we were wondering why Al looks so sad ;-; This picture is wonderful (Oh and i hope you dont hate me but i printed the picture out and gave it to my friends cuz i didnt know who the person was that made it, I'm sorry)
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mm. very nice aru.. it is looked like this [link]
nice job
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I am in LOVE with this picture..... seriously, this is probably my favorite picture, both on here and in the WORLD!!!!! Thank you thank you thank you for creating it!!!!
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Creo que las manos de Heidriech(sp?) necesitan un poco mรกs de detalle... No creo ver nada mal aparte de eso >w<
Muy buen concepto para este dibujo
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I like how Elric's jacket forms part of the border on this.
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Hola hablas esp. no?? XD me encantan todos los dibujos que hacer de Fullmetal Alchemist pero U:U porque les pones tu firma sobre la cara??? U.U weno si tienes razon con eso de que se apropian de las cosas pero ยฌยฌ se le quita un poco lo bonito
En fin me dejas agragarte a mi lista de contactos?? XD (darte watch? o.รฒ si se dice asi?? jajajajaja)
SAYO!!
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This is adorable! Aru looks so abused~
I can't say I can point out many flaws in this picture; it's just great :3 The coloring is so soft-looking, too~ <3
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Loved the picture, Big FMA fan here. The only thing that was a little weird was Al looks like a girl in this picture, could just be me though. *shrugs*
-Raven Joelle
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i love all of your art work i enjoy manga/anime style and started out drawing it but i deviated away from it but you make me want to stay with it lol the expressions are beautiful you mentioned something about how you thought maybe his eyes were too big. i have had issues drawing male manga/anime and it all starts with the eyes being big its beautiful but i havent kept up with my fma manga or anime series so i dont know much else it is lovely tho! keep it up ^.^
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i think it is really good the only thing that i see is that al's crotch looks a little long heh..... ya....
thats all that i noticed but otherwise amazing job!
*fav*
they looks so cute!!!
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Love. Tons and tons of love is deserved for this.
This makes my heart float with the warm fuzzies 
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The concept of the picture is really nice actually and the poses are good though a little awkward -- the folds of Al's pants are a little weird: either they're too small for him or it's just held up too high. Heiderich's aren't that long but with his arms around Al's shoulders, it would look more natural for his shoulders to hunch a bit to make him look like his head is bended a little -- it would make the picture look (for the lack of a better term) sweeter and the characters closer.
The clothes are bit stiff as well. Making the shadows bolder/darker and putting highlights would make it look more the clothes look more 3D and softer. Same goes for the skin. Highlights and dark shadows.
As for the background, making it darker and bolder would let the viewers focus on the characters themselves, kinda like putting a spotlight on the two so that the edges of the picture look darker or put some burn marks (something like that). Oh, and the text kinda gets neglected because it's placed down there. When you put text it a picture, there's a significance to it -- helps with the feel of the picture. Move it to a place where it could be seen more or change the format to make it more noticeable.
Style is different per artist (yes, and that includes that girly looking Al XP) so I can't really make much critique on that.
But anyway, the picture is nice and eye-catching. It's great, just not godly
Would that be a good enough critique for you? 
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Thanks a lot for your critique ^^
I won't be changing this pic, but It will help me improve other future works ^^
thx again =3
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That's beautiful, I love it! If it's alright with you, may I make a live journal icon with it? I'll credit you, of course.
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as long as you put your name on it or something so it won't be used byh anybody else but you o_o... because ppl tend to steal icons, post them on forums and then lots of ppl have it evenif it was made only for one person to use it ._.
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Ah, that would be true. In that case, yes, I will certainly put my name on it. If asked, I will credit the artwork to you. Thanks for permission! It really is a lovely picture.
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Very cool idea to draw the two alphonses like that.
must fave! X3
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thats so cute its almost perfect, they look so hwot X33; *favs*
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meh................!!! i don't want to critique! *cries* *favourites instead*
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Ayie! I dunno how I missed this the first time I went through your gallery, but even so - I love it. Sorry I can't really give any crit on it, even though it's encouraged. I figure anything I can say has already been addressed - and I like the pic too much to really pick up on any flaws anyway. I love the comparisons between the two Alphonse's...though Elric still wins me over. X3 I actually like the slightly fem look to him (he's always had a slightly fem touch in the anime/movie anyways.
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Heid's hand is a bit weird but hands are always hard
I think it's an awesome piccy
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