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Demachic — Optimistic Heart

Published: 2011-05-10 20:29:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 78474; Favourites: 4653; Downloads: 261
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Omg you guys ; u ; I didn't think this poem would get such overwhelming response :'D I love you all


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Poem about being bad at writing and english literary related things. @u@

Misspellings and random comma placement makes the poem deeper ahahahaha

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Demachic In reply to ??? [2011-05-21 13:41:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! 8D

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Piperonni In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 02:42:19 +0000 UTC]

That's adorable! Lovely job.

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Demachic In reply to Piperonni [2011-05-21 13:41:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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NanashiChan1689 In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 02:40:34 +0000 UTC]

Love it.

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Demachic In reply to NanashiChan1689 [2011-05-21 13:41:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Ashyboi In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 02:29:24 +0000 UTC]

This is actually genius. I love this so much; it's ironic, clever, cute - amazing!

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Demachic In reply to Ashyboi [2011-05-21 13:41:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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DustyButterfly In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 02:28:51 +0000 UTC]

So cute!

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Demachic In reply to DustyButterfly [2011-05-21 13:40:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Toxyk-Melodi In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 02:19:53 +0000 UTC]

That's just awesome xD
Lol.

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Demachic In reply to Toxyk-Melodi [2011-05-21 13:40:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you =]

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Ocianello In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 02:17:03 +0000 UTC]

I love this! I wish I had the creativity/skill to write such cute, witty little poems C:

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Demachic In reply to Ocianello [2011-07-02 02:18:45 +0000 UTC]

Ahw ; u ; Thanks a lot!

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Ocianello In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 02:15:42 +0000 UTC]

I love this! I wish I had the skill/creativity to write such witty little poems C:

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Demachic In reply to Ocianello [2011-05-21 13:40:36 +0000 UTC]

I bet you do ! Just give it a try, you never know! ^^

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LostInMyManga In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 02:12:10 +0000 UTC]

THis is really cute

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Demachic In reply to LostInMyManga [2011-05-21 13:40:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^^

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LostInMyManga In reply to Demachic [2011-05-22 03:16:11 +0000 UTC]

you're very welcome
I personally suck at poetry, like it's funny as hell to read.

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J-yeti In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 02:11:18 +0000 UTC]

D'aw. I think it's rather good.

I rather enjoy writing, and I think I'm adequate at it. But the only thing I have up on here is the poem in my DevID. :b. I need to post more.
Nice job!

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Demachic In reply to J-yeti [2011-05-21 13:40:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much C:

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CelesOran In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 02:06:38 +0000 UTC]

That's me!! I LOVE THIS btw!!

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Demachic In reply to CelesOran [2011-05-21 13:40:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^^

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AP-Wulf In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 01:58:25 +0000 UTC]

aww, that's really sweet! and awesome! I'm the queen of spelling and grammar, but when it comes to rhyme & time count me out

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Demachic In reply to AP-Wulf [2011-05-21 13:39:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Astealle In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 01:57:35 +0000 UTC]

Aww! What a cute poem. :3

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Demachic In reply to Astealle [2011-05-21 13:39:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you C:

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Kazlet In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 01:48:10 +0000 UTC]

I was sad, but I read this and now i'm so glad. Thank you <3

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Demachic In reply to Kazlet [2011-05-21 13:39:27 +0000 UTC]

Ohw thank you very much!

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Kiara-Mizu In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 01:46:18 +0000 UTC]

aww i think this poem is so adorable... it makes me want to hug you.....

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Demachic In reply to Kiara-Mizu [2011-05-21 13:39:13 +0000 UTC]

Ahhww ^///^ Thank you!

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Kiara-Mizu In reply to Demachic [2011-05-21 21:56:47 +0000 UTC]

WELCOME!!!! =3

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stiffkittenz In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 01:30:14 +0000 UTC]

This sounds so much like me man. I like how you turned your "bad" qualities about English into a poem (which you said you sucked at but here's a good one.) Really cool.

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Demachic In reply to stiffkittenz [2011-05-21 13:39:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you C:

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stiffkittenz In reply to Demachic [2011-05-25 15:57:43 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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Ally-x-Wally In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 01:17:07 +0000 UTC]

story of my life cx

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Demachic In reply to Ally-x-Wally [2011-05-21 13:38:51 +0000 UTC]

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Ani-Eimi In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 01:05:30 +0000 UTC]

lol This is cute!

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Demachic In reply to Ani-Eimi [2011-05-21 13:38:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Ani-Eimi In reply to Demachic [2011-05-21 20:44:36 +0000 UTC]

It reminded me of a tiny poem I'd written when I was little:
"I'm not pretty & I'm not smart.
I don't have much talent,
but at least I've got heart"
I felt this poem had sort of the same feel to it.

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restlessvendettas In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 00:44:07 +0000 UTC]

i really like the colours you've used and the style of the poem. I also relate to the content but i'm such a masochist i majored in literature at school and i still suck at all of the above! again lovely poem.

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Demachic In reply to restlessvendettas [2011-05-21 13:38:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!! ^_^

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StarbyStars In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 00:28:57 +0000 UTC]

this is so me thank you

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Demachic In reply to StarbyStars [2011-05-21 13:38:19 +0000 UTC]

Ahww gee, thank you!

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StarbyStars In reply to Demachic [2011-05-21 17:35:43 +0000 UTC]

aww your welcome

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KatieChandler In reply to ??? [2011-05-10 23:56:13 +0000 UTC]

I love it! great composition

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Demachic In reply to KatieChandler [2011-05-21 13:38:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!

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KatieChandler In reply to Demachic [2011-05-21 14:31:26 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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GumdropGhost In reply to ??? [2011-05-10 23:21:13 +0000 UTC]

Very sweet, though I couldn't tell if you misspelled punctuation on purpose or not xD

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Demachic In reply to GumdropGhost [2011-05-21 13:38:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^_^

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BethanyyJoelle In reply to ??? [2011-05-10 23:16:28 +0000 UTC]

haha its cute. you are too good! just don't compare yourself to others or anything,that's what gets anyone thinking they're bad. i really liked this <3

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