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Demachic — Optimistic Heart

Published: 2011-05-10 20:29:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 78445; Favourites: 4653; Downloads: 261
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Omg you guys ; u ; I didn't think this poem would get such overwhelming response :'D I love you all


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Poem about being bad at writing and english literary related things. @u@

Misspellings and random comma placement makes the poem deeper ahahahaha

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Comments: 666

Wolfgirlartist [2014-11-25 18:38:58 +0000 UTC]

I love love love the poems you write and the little pics beside them!!  

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ilove-the-craft-team [2013-12-17 20:18:42 +0000 UTC]

love it!!! you made my day 100% better!!

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Ris03 [2013-08-26 10:16:57 +0000 UTC]

Made my day. 

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Ask-TheWonderfulOCs [2013-07-12 04:38:10 +0000 UTC]

Cutest thing ever, this is totally me !!

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br8 [2013-07-10 05:35:53 +0000 UTC]

I finally made a life changing decision this is the most unique solution I came across these days I am my own boss try it out for yourself
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brOKen-Mayhem17 [2013-06-10 00:50:57 +0000 UTC]

LOOOVVEEEE IITTT!!! Another A+(biggest # u can think of=#of+'s!!)

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Amaysie [2013-04-02 09:42:43 +0000 UTC]

1: Totally -.-
2: Naah i can rhyme...
3: I love that one xD
4: I'm forgetful...wait...what was i about to say?
5: Sometimes :/
6: You BET! XDDD
7: Oh god....
8: Pass.
9: I don't think so...i have always wanted to be a writer
10: Well THAT'S true.
11: I don't know anything about poetry :I
12: Yeah i'm an optimstic person
13-14: Yeah i'm from Denmark...
15-16: Hey that's what my cutie mark means!

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kelskar [2013-01-20 21:02:38 +0000 UTC]

you are a totally random hero

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creativemikey [2013-01-11 07:36:59 +0000 UTC]

This has been featured here - [link]

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Demachic In reply to creativemikey [2013-01-13 01:56:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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AnimeFreak369 [2012-12-22 07:31:20 +0000 UTC]

This is so amazingly true for me! :3 I still post poetry on here even though i suck at it

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TheDarthFlorance [2012-12-16 15:20:49 +0000 UTC]

YAY, I LIKE YOUR JACK BLACK GIF.
I also like the poem, but poems in general don't compare to Jack Black.

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deviousrain [2012-12-06 16:24:03 +0000 UTC]

You're awesome!

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LadyBelikov [2012-11-25 01:55:22 +0000 UTC]

Love your poems
Pretty cute and simple!

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DemoniqueAlma [2012-11-23 05:16:16 +0000 UTC]

Gosh i need to work at this to.D:

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stealthyninja21 [2012-11-22 06:49:17 +0000 UTC]

i get this. i totally understand. haha, and you know what, im struggling with an english assignment now. thanks for the optimistic words!

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seahorses-fly-away [2012-11-15 00:36:23 +0000 UTC]

this is like my life story. so cool

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Little-Bird-Studio [2012-11-05 01:29:28 +0000 UTC]

Your poetry is truely amazing

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TheWolfsFriend [2012-11-02 22:44:41 +0000 UTC]

The last line hit me especially. To me, that means don't give up on it until you've given it a chance, and even then don't give up.

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Bunny-XD [2012-10-28 22:48:52 +0000 UTC]

wow. *speechless*

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Demachic In reply to Bunny-XD [2012-11-02 16:04:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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Crow1412 [2012-10-02 20:36:12 +0000 UTC]

This was amazing

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Demachic In reply to Crow1412 [2012-11-02 16:04:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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BlackRoseMelody [2012-10-01 02:56:35 +0000 UTC]

This is really cool! Your amazing! Would mind looking at my poems? I mean they're probably not as good as yours but I'd love to get feedback from an awesome writer like you!

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NarissatheHedghog [2012-09-27 10:48:53 +0000 UTC]

pfft, you're not awful or bad or terrible in any way! You're awesome!!

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Demachic In reply to NarissatheHedghog [2012-11-02 16:04:34 +0000 UTC]

:'] Thank you!!

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NarissatheHedghog In reply to Demachic [2012-11-02 21:16:12 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome ^^

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msmusic137 [2012-09-25 21:51:19 +0000 UTC]

You are absolutely, positively, without a doubt A M A Z I N G!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Demachic In reply to msmusic137 [2012-11-02 16:04:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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msmusic137 In reply to Demachic [2012-11-06 23:00:52 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Devil-Black-Heart [2012-09-01 16:28:59 +0000 UTC]

So true X3 its just me

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Demachic In reply to Devil-Black-Heart [2012-11-02 16:04:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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neahung [2012-08-13 07:37:06 +0000 UTC]

amazing~

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Demachic In reply to neahung [2012-11-02 16:04:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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DogsTeeth [2012-07-11 00:18:09 +0000 UTC]

I love these so much >//< So Inspiring

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Demachic In reply to DogsTeeth [2012-11-02 16:04:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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DogsTeeth In reply to Demachic [2012-11-06 20:57:55 +0000 UTC]

Of course! <3

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manathequeen [2012-06-28 12:59:55 +0000 UTC]

I love this poem! So true for me...

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Demachic In reply to manathequeen [2012-11-02 16:04:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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karabasik17 [2012-06-27 08:56:50 +0000 UTC]

I feel the same! I'm just terrible with grammar and spelling. And still I love to write.

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Demachic In reply to karabasik17 [2012-11-02 16:04:18 +0000 UTC]

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HGKitty [2012-05-30 16:32:21 +0000 UTC]

I love this! I have the same problem! but I love to write! this really makes me happy knowing that even if I am not good I should never give up! thank you so much!

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Demachic In reply to HGKitty [2012-06-13 17:48:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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HGKitty In reply to Demachic [2012-06-13 20:53:34 +0000 UTC]

its so great

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FerahW [2012-05-27 18:20:24 +0000 UTC]

Such a lovely, optimistic poem. Favorited!

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Demachic In reply to FerahW [2012-06-13 17:48:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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FerahW In reply to Demachic [2012-06-14 09:52:48 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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DrJonass [2012-05-21 21:21:30 +0000 UTC]

soooo good <3 !
i like it so much

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Demachic In reply to DrJonass [2012-06-13 17:48:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Chennette [2012-05-21 17:43:20 +0000 UTC]

Adorable!

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