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Demachic — Optimistic Heart

Published: 2011-05-10 20:29:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 78445; Favourites: 4653; Downloads: 261
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Omg you guys ; u ; I didn't think this poem would get such overwhelming response :'D I love you all

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Poem about being bad at writing and english literary related things. @u@

Misspellings and random comma placement makes the poem deeper ahahahaha

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Comments: 666

Demachic In reply to ??? [2012-03-31 15:00:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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DamnGoodNachos In reply to Demachic [2012-03-31 17:29:58 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome.

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InvaderCyberSassy In reply to ??? [2012-01-21 17:10:11 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful. Simply beautiful. I love it!

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Livie-spause [2012-01-07 00:34:31 +0000 UTC]

yeah buddy!

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Demachic In reply to Livie-spause [2012-01-09 23:10:03 +0000 UTC]

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AmyRPF13 In reply to ??? [2011-12-26 12:09:33 +0000 UTC]

Love it

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Liz-Elane97 [2011-12-25 01:13:32 +0000 UTC]

Love this^^ this so describes me by the way i love the way it is. so colorful^^

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caramelGraphic In reply to ??? [2011-12-12 12:30:48 +0000 UTC]

i love it, i love it more, i love it the most !

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catapuss27 [2011-11-22 21:23:08 +0000 UTC]

:3 love this!

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Tasneem In reply to ??? [2011-11-20 18:58:14 +0000 UTC]

This was darling hahaha

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10piplup09 In reply to ??? [2011-11-05 12:36:01 +0000 UTC]

What's with the multi-coloured high lighting?

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SweetPie10 [2011-10-29 15:54:49 +0000 UTC]

line 10 is definitely true.
I only remember 1 story that I finished and it ended up being 12 pages!

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Demachic In reply to SweetPie10 [2011-11-04 20:40:13 +0000 UTC]

O:

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audreymo96 [2011-10-24 11:51:20 +0000 UTC]

what font did you used for this?

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rainy129 In reply to ??? [2011-10-23 00:44:30 +0000 UTC]

no. you are awesome at writing :3

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Demachic In reply to rainy129 [2011-11-04 20:39:50 +0000 UTC]

Ahwww shucks ^////^

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A-teinna In reply to ??? [2011-10-22 21:00:51 +0000 UTC]

Hi dear member of

your lovely piece of art has been featured in my latest news-article of the devious/colorcrazy folders:
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Thanks for sharing

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PhantomExpress [2011-10-21 05:49:52 +0000 UTC]

i ♥ the first four lines

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Demachic In reply to PhantomExpress [2011-11-04 20:39:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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Buckykatt42 [2011-10-21 02:03:25 +0000 UTC]

I like this I always try to be optimistic as well.

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Demachic In reply to Buckykatt42 [2011-11-04 20:39:34 +0000 UTC]

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GoddessWashuHakubi [2011-10-21 01:19:33 +0000 UTC]

I love this! The only flaw is that 'assignment' and 'tried it' don't rhyme.

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LexLuvs2Write In reply to ??? [2011-10-20 19:24:49 +0000 UTC]

This fits me so well I can relate Loved it!

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Demachic In reply to LexLuvs2Write [2011-11-04 20:39:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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LexLuvs2Write In reply to Demachic [2011-11-05 00:09:26 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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KawaiiCutie1 In reply to ??? [2011-10-20 00:56:56 +0000 UTC]

i love your poems there so touching and something that i think everyone has gone through all those things and it fun cause it brings back memories again i love it <3

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Demachic In reply to KawaiiCutie1 [2011-11-04 20:39:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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raych3l [2011-10-19 05:32:07 +0000 UTC]

this was absolutely hilarious. i was reading poems and this one came up, i was reading them to my boyfriend and i was judging from the first two verses that i could relate then i started cracking up at the end because all this was totally me and i didn't expect it to. XD

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Demachic In reply to raych3l [2011-11-04 20:39:51 +0000 UTC]

Ahh! Thank you!!

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Demachic In reply to raych3l [2011-11-04 20:39:01 +0000 UTC]

Ahh! Thank you!!

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my-bloody-death In reply to ??? [2011-10-19 04:42:21 +0000 UTC]

aww I love it it totally describes me!

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Demachic In reply to my-bloody-death [2011-11-04 20:38:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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my-bloody-death In reply to Demachic [2011-11-05 06:03:01 +0000 UTC]

lol you're welcome!

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windarkcat In reply to ??? [2011-10-19 04:07:17 +0000 UTC]

your poems are so cool *-*

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Demachic In reply to windarkcat [2011-11-04 20:38:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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Kemi242 In reply to ??? [2011-10-19 03:56:09 +0000 UTC]

;v; haha if u had a book with ur things i would buy it XD

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Demachic In reply to Kemi242 [2011-11-04 20:38:37 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow! Thank you!!

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cNhiansae [2011-10-19 01:44:46 +0000 UTC]

I feel this way. I like writing stories but I'm pretty bad at it. I have fun writing it though.

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Demachic In reply to cNhiansae [2011-11-04 20:38:27 +0000 UTC]

Thats what matters really!

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MrsDerekSouza [2011-10-18 21:45:13 +0000 UTC]

this is so cute

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Demachic In reply to MrsDerekSouza [2011-11-04 20:38:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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Alex715 [2011-10-09 22:47:06 +0000 UTC]

this is TOALLY me!

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Demachic In reply to Alex715 [2011-10-15 12:26:14 +0000 UTC]

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carlymonster In reply to ??? [2011-10-08 20:27:05 +0000 UTC]

story of my life!

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Demachic In reply to carlymonster [2011-10-15 12:26:08 +0000 UTC]

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Fruchtzucker In reply to ??? [2011-09-25 17:12:09 +0000 UTC]

Oh, it sounds like me... I'm bad in everything..

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Demachic In reply to Fruchtzucker [2011-10-15 12:26:02 +0000 UTC]

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SpecificSleep [2011-09-25 04:10:46 +0000 UTC]

Now, your writing this...
Strange. I'd never took you as the type to lie.

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Demachic In reply to SpecificSleep [2011-10-15 12:25:56 +0000 UTC]

haha!

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SurroundedByTrees [2011-09-24 15:22:28 +0000 UTC]

Sounds jst like myself.

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