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Demachic — Optimistic Heart

Published: 2011-05-10 20:29:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 78445; Favourites: 4653; Downloads: 261
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Omg you guys ; u ; I didn't think this poem would get such overwhelming response :'D I love you all

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Poem about being bad at writing and english literary related things. @u@

Misspellings and random comma placement makes the poem deeper ahahahaha

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Comments: 666

Demachic In reply to ??? [2012-06-13 17:47:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Sakurita-TRC24 [2012-05-20 03:01:22 +0000 UTC]

I loveee all yoour work...always makes me smile this is one of my favz

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Demachic In reply to Sakurita-TRC24 [2012-06-13 17:48:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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AcexMEEE [2012-05-15 00:18:20 +0000 UTC]

Lol ^^ Cute poem~

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Demachic In reply to AcexMEEE [2012-06-13 17:47:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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AcexMEEE In reply to Demachic [2012-06-14 11:35:30 +0000 UTC]

No problem ^^

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KittyKitty889 [2012-04-29 07:27:38 +0000 UTC]

<3

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Demachic In reply to KittyKitty889 [2012-05-03 21:56:37 +0000 UTC]

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Hetalia-Bubble [2012-04-21 20:32:15 +0000 UTC]

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Demachic In reply to Hetalia-Bubble [2012-04-28 20:57:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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Hetalia-Bubble In reply to Demachic [2012-04-29 18:31:56 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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Kiyoshi11 [2012-04-15 18:34:15 +0000 UTC]

I am bad at most of the things you wrote about but there is nothing bad about trying

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Demachic In reply to Kiyoshi11 [2012-04-28 20:57:52 +0000 UTC]

Exactly!

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thelytlemonster [2012-04-14 23:44:54 +0000 UTC]

These are truly inspirational

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Demachic In reply to thelytlemonster [2012-04-28 20:57:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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JessRg9 [2012-04-06 23:23:31 +0000 UTC]

lol love this....

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Demachic In reply to JessRg9 [2012-04-09 23:24:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Marwarsgfn [2012-04-06 03:52:56 +0000 UTC]

wow that describes me to a tee

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Demachic In reply to Marwarsgfn [2012-04-09 23:24:34 +0000 UTC]

haha yay

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Ellssuuhh [2012-03-30 13:50:16 +0000 UTC]

wow , like it

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Demachic In reply to Ellssuuhh [2012-03-31 15:02:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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mnola23 [2012-03-30 11:15:28 +0000 UTC]

gee, i really like your poems, there're creative

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Demachic In reply to mnola23 [2012-03-31 15:02:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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mnola23 In reply to Demachic [2012-03-31 23:23:16 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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Cafekko102 [2012-03-24 22:17:14 +0000 UTC]

Omo, love ~ !
Hm, what's your name? (I suck at reading cursive...) I just wanna credit you.

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Mymagic1212 In reply to ??? [2012-03-15 23:28:55 +0000 UTC]

om good at english but bad at poems

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Demachic In reply to Mymagic1212 [2012-03-31 15:02:36 +0000 UTC]

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MidnightCasanova [2012-03-13 23:53:29 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE YOUR POEMS!

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Demachic In reply to MidnightCasanova [2012-03-31 15:02:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Silent4everBeatless In reply to ??? [2012-02-25 03:12:13 +0000 UTC]

Aww! This was adorable ^^

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Demachic In reply to Silent4everBeatless [2012-03-31 15:02:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Silent4everBeatless In reply to Demachic [2012-04-11 23:33:02 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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SimplyFlawlessA [2012-02-16 03:27:13 +0000 UTC]

Pretty Awesome !

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Demachic In reply to SimplyFlawlessA [2012-03-31 15:02:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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shadowknite [2012-02-14 16:20:10 +0000 UTC]

cute and colorful so fun

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Demachic In reply to shadowknite [2012-03-31 15:02:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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shadowknite In reply to Demachic [2012-03-31 20:33:20 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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deaththekidluv8 [2012-02-14 01:02:36 +0000 UTC]

I'll say. It's I'm not Im, like I am.

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Demachic In reply to deaththekidluv8 [2012-03-31 15:02:19 +0000 UTC]

I know, that's the point

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WeirdxArtist [2012-02-11 16:11:50 +0000 UTC]

Note: in poetry, there are no rules

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Demachic In reply to WeirdxArtist [2012-02-11 18:07:23 +0000 UTC]

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QueenOnewMilady [2012-01-28 00:56:43 +0000 UTC]

You SAY you're bad at poetry.....

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Demachic In reply to QueenOnewMilady [2012-03-31 15:01:51 +0000 UTC]

: )

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AyeSee In reply to ??? [2012-01-24 07:42:08 +0000 UTC]

Wow. Just simply, Wow.

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Demachic In reply to AyeSee [2012-03-31 15:01:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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HungryTaz In reply to ??? [2012-01-23 22:33:40 +0000 UTC]

you are smart!! great poem and colors!

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Demachic In reply to HungryTaz [2012-03-31 15:01:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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insanechild-point2 [2012-01-22 12:01:15 +0000 UTC]

Gotta love the deep and meaningful comma placement

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Demachic In reply to insanechild-point2 [2012-03-31 15:01:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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DamnGoodNachos [2012-01-22 03:36:29 +0000 UTC]

Cute.

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