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Demachic — Optimistic Heart

Published: 2011-05-10 20:29:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 78448; Favourites: 4653; Downloads: 261
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Omg you guys ; u ; I didn't think this poem would get such overwhelming response :'D I love you all


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Poem about being bad at writing and english literary related things. @u@

Misspellings and random comma placement makes the poem deeper ahahahaha

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Demachic In reply to ??? [2011-10-15 12:25:47 +0000 UTC]

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AceMagestar In reply to ??? [2011-09-17 01:10:56 +0000 UTC]

Hmm... I'd say you're a poetic genius. Well done, I have seen some off your works and I say that all of them are well done. Amazing job.

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Demachic In reply to AceMagestar [2011-09-17 23:38:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot!!

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xXSellChanXx [2011-09-05 00:33:31 +0000 UTC]

AMAZING!! I love this poem

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AmberIsInLOVE In reply to ??? [2011-08-30 02:08:40 +0000 UTC]

I love this >

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Demachic In reply to AmberIsInLOVE [2011-09-04 00:01:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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AmberIsInLOVE [2011-08-30 02:07:19 +0000 UTC]

loveloveplz

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sures1109 In reply to ??? [2011-08-21 17:02:19 +0000 UTC]

Me and you both

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Demachic In reply to sures1109 [2011-09-04 00:01:35 +0000 UTC]

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Animegottalive In reply to ??? [2011-08-21 16:00:22 +0000 UTC]

YOU ARE A GENIUS!

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Demachic In reply to Animegottalive [2011-09-04 00:01:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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ThreeTeabags [2011-08-21 15:36:01 +0000 UTC]

I quite like this XD
I love this series of poems, they're really sweet!
If I was a publisher I'd be chasing all over the country to try and find you to publish these

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Demachic In reply to ThreeTeabags [2011-09-04 00:01:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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ThreeTeabags In reply to Demachic [2011-09-22 09:56:07 +0000 UTC]

very welcome

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Jessa-Lou In reply to ??? [2011-08-21 14:53:37 +0000 UTC]

This poem sums up me

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WindsnapPhotography In reply to ??? [2011-08-21 14:23:10 +0000 UTC]

lovely! your poems are simply genius

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Demachic In reply to WindsnapPhotography [2011-09-04 00:01:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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C-A-Visualizations [2011-08-21 09:06:49 +0000 UTC]

Whenever I feel negative,
about what I can do,
I'll just read this poem,
then I'll feel as good as new!

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Demachic In reply to C-A-Visualizations [2011-09-04 00:01:10 +0000 UTC]

haha ahwww Thank you!

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Lightstar98 [2011-08-21 08:55:54 +0000 UTC]

this is sweet!
You know how to work with words^^

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Demachic In reply to Lightstar98 [2011-09-04 00:01:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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blackrosethornes [2011-08-21 04:58:58 +0000 UTC]

OMG! i love this poem and quiet a ew of ur other ones. they're so much fun to read

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Demachic In reply to blackrosethornes [2011-09-04 00:00:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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ClaireLeah In reply to ??? [2011-08-21 04:20:14 +0000 UTC]

I love it! very honest, simple and inspiring keep it up!

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Demachic In reply to ClaireLeah [2011-09-04 00:00:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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usagi323 In reply to ??? [2011-08-21 04:01:52 +0000 UTC]

Yes!! Spellin and grammer KILL me! XD Even though I excell in english related glasses! O.o

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MusicBeyondYou09 In reply to ??? [2011-08-21 03:30:27 +0000 UTC]

im beaten.... i wanna write poems!!!!!!!!!!!!! i wrote some before..but i dont know if they're somewhat ....OKAY...? o.O

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DistahDrawer [2011-08-21 01:13:01 +0000 UTC]

Aww this really means alot!

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Demachic In reply to DistahDrawer [2011-09-04 00:00:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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AllTimeJenny In reply to ??? [2011-08-21 01:08:12 +0000 UTC]

I love this one!!!!

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Demachic In reply to AllTimeJenny [2011-09-04 00:00:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Sasuko-chan In reply to ??? [2011-08-21 00:51:46 +0000 UTC]

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Demachic In reply to Sasuko-chan [2011-09-04 00:00:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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chamha In reply to ??? [2011-08-20 21:22:15 +0000 UTC]

your poems, they're so cute!!! hehe, the random comma placement makes the poem much, much deeper... :3

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Demachic In reply to chamha [2011-09-04 00:00:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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chamha In reply to Demachic [2011-09-04 02:16:05 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome!

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LaughterLover In reply to ??? [2011-08-20 21:00:43 +0000 UTC]

All your poems, *sniffle* they're so beautiful. Great job! Excellent!

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Demachic In reply to LaughterLover [2011-09-04 00:00:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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LaughterLover In reply to Demachic [2011-09-05 04:48:18 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Hated-Lost-Angle [2011-08-20 20:26:26 +0000 UTC]

Your poems are sweet
I find them really neat
Inspiration It sings
Filling my head with lovely things
Your poems are great
And that's what I appreciate

--
"I hate you!!!" I yell
"I love you too!" Cody laughs

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Demachic In reply to Hated-Lost-Angle [2011-09-04 00:00:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Hated-Lost-Angle In reply to Demachic [2011-09-09 01:03:16 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!

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IZLOVA4EVA In reply to ??? [2011-08-20 06:04:53 +0000 UTC]

Better words couldn't have been said :*3

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Demachic In reply to IZLOVA4EVA [2011-08-20 15:24:18 +0000 UTC]

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ditkata In reply to ??? [2011-08-15 11:08:25 +0000 UTC]

love it!!

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Demachic In reply to ditkata [2011-08-20 15:15:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot! ^^

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ditkata In reply to Demachic [2011-08-21 17:40:34 +0000 UTC]

wellcome ^^

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jadeasistores [2011-08-15 09:13:48 +0000 UTC]

wow, I love it!

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Demachic In reply to jadeasistores [2011-08-20 15:14:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot! ^^

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xAssurax [2011-08-08 23:29:31 +0000 UTC]

I have read it thousand of times, and I can't stop

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