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Demachic — Optimistic Heart

Published: 2011-05-10 20:29:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 78453; Favourites: 4653; Downloads: 261
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Omg you guys ; u ; I didn't think this poem would get such overwhelming response :'D I love you all


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Poem about being bad at writing and english literary related things. @u@

Misspellings and random comma placement makes the poem deeper ahahahaha

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Loobie101 In reply to ??? [2011-08-05 01:29:59 +0000 UTC]

your sooo freakin creative!

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StrawberrieMew In reply to ??? [2011-07-31 18:33:58 +0000 UTC]

I fall in love with your cute, simple yet inspirational poems!

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lovedaydreaming In reply to ??? [2011-07-31 16:44:44 +0000 UTC]

OMG!! i can relate all of ur poems

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its-ash-yo [2011-07-31 11:48:45 +0000 UTC]

i really adore this poem so much but im really good at grammar lols, but im still gonna print this and stick it on the front of my english book if you'll allow me

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Peaniko In reply to ??? [2011-07-31 05:28:25 +0000 UTC]

Ahhhh I should save myself the trouble and just add all your poems. I apply to skills in general. I have taken soooo many classes just to see and find out if I'm any good at them. I'm still waiting for the chance to windsurf And I suck at English class XD but you are NOT bad at writing poems lol.

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SorbetBerry In reply to ??? [2011-07-30 23:52:00 +0000 UTC]

what??!?! this poem is sooo epic!!!
Haha, the "bad at writing stories/poems" is so me...

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slagels [2011-07-30 22:22:52 +0000 UTC]

Story of my life. Well, the story and grammar parts at least. I've spoken fluent language since I was 8-9 years old, and that's pretty good, considering it's my second language.

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cupcakeattack In reply to ??? [2011-07-30 22:14:23 +0000 UTC]

(heart) =3

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Demachic In reply to cupcakeattack [2011-08-13 23:11:00 +0000 UTC]

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cupcakeattack In reply to Demachic [2011-08-14 07:05:55 +0000 UTC]

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purplepuppies10 In reply to ??? [2011-07-30 21:55:24 +0000 UTC]

<(I wuv it!)

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Spark-Dragon [2011-07-30 20:00:15 +0000 UTC]

that is me!

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Demachic In reply to Spark-Dragon [2011-08-13 23:10:19 +0000 UTC]

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Spark-Dragon In reply to Demachic [2011-08-14 12:00:13 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE YOUR POEMS

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Alyssa921 In reply to ??? [2011-07-27 17:27:31 +0000 UTC]

Same!!!

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Demachic In reply to Alyssa921 [2011-07-27 22:10:43 +0000 UTC]

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Alyssa921 In reply to Demachic [2011-07-30 21:08:17 +0000 UTC]

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DreamCreator77 [2011-07-26 20:16:45 +0000 UTC]

i would say ur SMASHING at it! care to take a look at my poems and stories???

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scigeek123 In reply to ??? [2011-07-26 17:22:13 +0000 UTC]

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Demachic In reply to scigeek123 [2011-07-27 22:10:36 +0000 UTC]

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SpaceSquiddles In reply to ??? [2011-07-26 11:45:11 +0000 UTC]

i'm going to show this to my wee brother! he's mentally disabled and isn't that great at spelling but i think he'll love this!

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Demachic In reply to SpaceSquiddles [2011-07-26 14:32:17 +0000 UTC]

Ahww :') Thanks, I hope he likes it!

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SpaceSquiddles In reply to Demachic [2011-07-26 14:43:50 +0000 UTC]

^^

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reeboks-girl In reply to ??? [2011-07-12 10:34:36 +0000 UTC]

true!!!

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Pepsi-vs-Coke In reply to ??? [2011-07-12 04:19:13 +0000 UTC]

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AleciaMaria In reply to ??? [2011-07-10 04:12:03 +0000 UTC]

Cute!

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fishybusiness54 In reply to ??? [2011-07-10 01:07:26 +0000 UTC]

What are you talking about your bad at poems?!
And rhyme?? And words??
This poem is AMAZING!

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Feezessin [2011-07-09 09:39:12 +0000 UTC]

This is really awesome <3

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ruegrey In reply to ??? [2011-07-07 15:35:07 +0000 UTC]

Its adorable!!!

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Giffin2 In reply to ??? [2011-07-07 15:22:30 +0000 UTC]

I honestly never had THAT problem in english. What MY problem was is that I'm TOO good. I normally can't write a good story in any less than 4 pages. My ideas are just too grand. XD Nice poem!

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amazingOO11 In reply to ??? [2011-07-07 14:07:23 +0000 UTC]

love it!

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zfr0016 In reply to ??? [2011-07-07 13:32:00 +0000 UTC]

"Poem about being bad at writing and English literary related things. @u@"

I know exactly how you feel in this regard. I am currently studying college business and technical writing. This poem has helped me to realize that I am not on my own in feeling somewhat insufficient for the task at hand. Others do share the exact same sentiments as I. I thank you for expressing your true inner feelings in such an insightful and raw manner. I have finally found the inspiration to help me pull through the remaining of my writing course. {:

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FlyBlossom In reply to ??? [2011-07-07 13:30:42 +0000 UTC]

your poems are good
do you want to be a writer/poet?
you really should and with your creative ideas im sure you'd have a lot of fans for it

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lasako In reply to ??? [2011-07-07 06:50:03 +0000 UTC]

Okay, I'm going to have to put you on my watch list, your poems are fantastic! I love your calm and relaxed way of writing, and your word choices just thrill me.

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Awesome9000 In reply to ??? [2011-07-07 05:58:52 +0000 UTC]

i love your poetry!

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Gjortler In reply to ??? [2011-07-05 11:28:55 +0000 UTC]

Soo true!

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GodRustang In reply to ??? [2011-07-02 14:24:50 +0000 UTC]

xD seriously its amazingly incitefull, your good at this xD

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Demachic In reply to GodRustang [2011-07-02 17:43:33 +0000 UTC]

Thaaank you C:

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socksCocks In reply to ??? [2011-07-02 00:05:40 +0000 UTC]

You spelt English wrong.
Ironic much?

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Demachic In reply to socksCocks [2011-07-02 00:08:08 +0000 UTC]

. . . did I?

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socksCocks In reply to Demachic [2011-07-02 05:22:31 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, no looking at your poem, you didn't.
I don't even remember saying this! How rude of me. I wonder what I was thinking? This is so random!! I'm sorry.

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otakuninja749 In reply to ??? [2011-06-18 03:50:34 +0000 UTC]

woooww amazing

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Demachic In reply to otakuninja749 [2011-07-02 02:31:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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trevor4056 In reply to ??? [2011-06-17 17:18:59 +0000 UTC]

wow this is totally me too.

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Demachic In reply to trevor4056 [2011-07-02 02:31:21 +0000 UTC]

Ahw yay

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trevor4056 In reply to Demachic [2011-07-02 19:22:11 +0000 UTC]

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NaceWoulf In reply to ??? [2011-06-13 04:03:06 +0000 UTC]

U r friggin awesome and have inspired me. *.*

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Demachic In reply to NaceWoulf [2011-07-02 02:31:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you a lot ; u ;

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hinata-sasuke222 In reply to ??? [2011-06-11 08:06:16 +0000 UTC]

awww imma have to share this with my friend whose extremely pessimistic.... he's such a downer sometimes maybe i this'll chear him up C:

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Demachic In reply to hinata-sasuke222 [2011-07-02 02:31:06 +0000 UTC]

haha aw! Thanks so much!!

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