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Demachic — Optimistic Heart

Published: 2011-05-10 20:29:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 78460; Favourites: 4653; Downloads: 261
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Omg you guys ; u ; I didn't think this poem would get such overwhelming response :'D I love you all


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Poem about being bad at writing and english literary related things. @u@

Misspellings and random comma placement makes the poem deeper ahahahaha

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hinata-sasuke222 In reply to ??? [2011-07-02 02:45:30 +0000 UTC]

you are quite welcome C: it really cheered him up too!

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ciel27 In reply to ??? [2011-06-11 03:15:44 +0000 UTC]

this sounds so great
*claps* XDD

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Demachic In reply to ciel27 [2011-07-02 02:30:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Surfinghaxorus [2011-06-10 18:07:48 +0000 UTC]

I have the same problems!

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Demachic In reply to Surfinghaxorus [2011-07-02 02:30:49 +0000 UTC]

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punk0000 In reply to ??? [2011-06-10 17:26:46 +0000 UTC]

Awww!

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Demachic In reply to punk0000 [2011-07-02 02:30:45 +0000 UTC]

haha! Thanks

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punk0000 In reply to Demachic [2011-07-02 15:25:18 +0000 UTC]

you are welcome

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MissStar489 In reply to ??? [2011-06-10 17:19:54 +0000 UTC]

OMG! i love it
i hated writing
i still dont like being forst to do so
i still cat spell for shit
and my gramer is a fail
at first i coudnt git a story
but then i had a flood
and now i cant git them out of my head!

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Demachic In reply to MissStar489 [2011-07-02 02:30:38 +0000 UTC]

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MissStar489 In reply to Demachic [2011-07-02 17:36:17 +0000 UTC]

thanks -u-

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sarahnlove [2011-06-08 03:36:24 +0000 UTC]

these are adorable!!!!!

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Demachic In reply to sarahnlove [2011-07-02 02:30:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you C:

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dingbat-doodles In reply to ??? [2011-06-05 23:00:18 +0000 UTC]

I love it!! ~

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Demachic In reply to dingbat-doodles [2011-07-02 02:30:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! ^^

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WaitingForEuphoria In reply to ??? [2011-05-22 12:00:16 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful. So expressice

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Demachic In reply to WaitingForEuphoria [2011-07-02 02:30:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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WaitingForEuphoria In reply to Demachic [2011-07-03 07:19:07 +0000 UTC]

Oops, I meant to say expressive... LOL Well you're welcome

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Stack-A-Cat In reply to ??? [2011-05-21 22:44:07 +0000 UTC]

great poem! ur rhythm is amazing. the last line is kinda meh but still wonderful all the same

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Demachic In reply to Stack-A-Cat [2011-07-02 02:29:59 +0000 UTC]

=]

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DesireAutumn77 In reply to ??? [2011-05-18 21:24:24 +0000 UTC]

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Demachic In reply to DesireAutumn77 [2011-07-02 02:29:52 +0000 UTC]

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GodRustang In reply to ??? [2011-05-18 21:22:07 +0000 UTC]

ok now i just wanna give you a hug. <3

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Demachic In reply to GodRustang [2011-07-02 02:29:46 +0000 UTC]

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GodRustang In reply to Demachic [2011-07-02 14:23:27 +0000 UTC]

xD idk how to insert the emoticons properly so just... lots of hugs xD

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Lynx0204 In reply to ??? [2011-05-18 19:20:27 +0000 UTC]

awww come on~ who wouldn't love this~ haha~

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Demachic In reply to Lynx0204 [2011-07-02 02:29:40 +0000 UTC]

T u T Thank you so much!

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Zorathar24 [2011-05-18 15:19:45 +0000 UTC]

what are you talking about your great at poetry in my opinion

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Demachic In reply to Zorathar24 [2011-07-02 02:29:29 +0000 UTC]

C: Thank you so much!!

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Zatsune218 In reply to ??? [2011-05-18 09:50:27 +0000 UTC]

What're you talking about? you're such an amazing poet!

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Demachic In reply to Zatsune218 [2011-07-02 02:29:08 +0000 UTC]

:'D Oh my, thank you!

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Cicillia In reply to ??? [2011-05-18 09:16:02 +0000 UTC]

So true!

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Demachic In reply to Cicillia [2011-07-02 02:29:01 +0000 UTC]

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joytheweird777 In reply to ??? [2011-05-18 05:50:27 +0000 UTC]

you are an AWESOME poet.

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Demachic In reply to joytheweird777 [2011-07-02 02:28:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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joytheweird777 In reply to Demachic [2011-07-02 03:38:48 +0000 UTC]


no problem!

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summerday27 In reply to ??? [2011-05-18 02:17:22 +0000 UTC]

Story of my life

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Demachic In reply to summerday27 [2011-07-02 02:28:38 +0000 UTC]

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summerday27 In reply to Demachic [2011-07-02 13:17:59 +0000 UTC]

lol

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becloss In reply to ??? [2011-05-16 12:04:41 +0000 UTC]

This is just lovely, i find myself reading it again and again

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Demachic In reply to becloss [2011-07-02 02:28:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much ; u ;

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AnimeOtaku4444 In reply to ??? [2011-05-16 09:04:45 +0000 UTC]

Trust me, you're way better at poetry than you think.

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Demachic In reply to AnimeOtaku4444 [2011-07-02 02:28:25 +0000 UTC]

; u ;

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xXxDemonprincessxXx In reply to ??? [2011-05-16 06:58:49 +0000 UTC]

Bad at poetry? I think not! This is lovely! You are truly gifted.

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Demachic In reply to xXxDemonprincessxXx [2011-07-02 02:28:20 +0000 UTC]

Ahww Thanks!

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MCYK606 In reply to ??? [2011-05-16 06:06:54 +0000 UTC]

Another great one, I am just like that.

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Demachic In reply to MCYK606 [2011-07-02 02:28:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you C:

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ballerina-chick In reply to MCYK606 [2011-05-16 06:52:24 +0000 UTC]

me too....

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Shira--hime In reply to ??? [2011-05-16 05:10:14 +0000 UTC]

Your poetry is so interesting! It's very personal and adding the colors makes it brilliant. ^^

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Demachic In reply to Shira--hime [2011-07-02 02:28:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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