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Demachic — Optimistic Heart

Published: 2011-05-10 20:29:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 78461; Favourites: 4653; Downloads: 261
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Omg you guys ; u ; I didn't think this poem would get such overwhelming response :'D I love you all


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Poem about being bad at writing and english literary related things. @u@

Misspellings and random comma placement makes the poem deeper ahahahaha

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Comments: 666

Shira--hime In reply to ??? [2011-07-05 16:40:24 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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CherryChrisyPop In reply to ??? [2011-05-15 20:14:32 +0000 UTC]

yeaaa... me too

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Demachic In reply to CherryChrisyPop [2011-07-02 02:28:01 +0000 UTC]

;]

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CherryChrisyPop In reply to Demachic [2011-07-02 14:27:09 +0000 UTC]


btw love ur signature

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Angelcakes21 In reply to ??? [2011-05-15 20:12:45 +0000 UTC]

This poem so describes me... i wuv u...

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Demachic In reply to Angelcakes21 [2011-07-02 02:27:56 +0000 UTC]

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Angelcakes21 In reply to Demachic [2011-07-03 06:33:57 +0000 UTC]

^^

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Sound-Of-Soul In reply to ??? [2011-05-15 19:21:28 +0000 UTC]

Your poems are epic man..... i rove you! ><

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Demachic In reply to Sound-Of-Soul [2011-07-02 02:27:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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Angelcakes21 In reply to Sound-Of-Soul [2011-05-15 20:14:32 +0000 UTC]

LOVE the user name and sig! I also love Joey from friends.

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Sound-Of-Soul In reply to Angelcakes21 [2011-05-16 21:01:06 +0000 UTC]

dawww. Thanksies~! <3

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Angelcakes21 In reply to Sound-Of-Soul [2011-05-17 11:31:40 +0000 UTC]

And your avatar reminds me of Luna from Vocaloid. Is that who it is?

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Sound-Of-Soul In reply to Angelcakes21 [2011-05-18 02:38:21 +0000 UTC]

Its Tako Luka. C: because Luka is bomb.

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Angelcakes21 In reply to Sound-Of-Soul [2011-05-18 05:30:03 +0000 UTC]

OH, Luka, yeah.... I thought it was LUNA, sorry...

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Sound-Of-Soul In reply to Angelcakes21 [2011-05-18 05:40:48 +0000 UTC]

Its cool.

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Angelcakes21 In reply to Sound-Of-Soul [2011-05-18 06:00:33 +0000 UTC]

^^

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Ichigosluver In reply to ??? [2011-05-15 17:45:31 +0000 UTC]

Awesomesauce! I get this way too. I think everyone does

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Demachic In reply to Ichigosluver [2011-07-02 02:27:48 +0000 UTC]

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KawaiiBat In reply to ??? [2011-05-15 17:10:47 +0000 UTC]

And you say your bad at poetry in this thing! XP

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Demachic In reply to KawaiiBat [2011-07-02 02:27:43 +0000 UTC]

c;

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NeonIcing In reply to ??? [2011-05-15 14:47:21 +0000 UTC]

Eh, I always use E.E Cummings for examples on being bad with spelling and punctuation isn't bad. He would barely use punctuation, and commas,would be without spaces like that;the same with semi-colons like that, some would wouldbe likethis too. And look, he's famous for poetry. I say spelling and punctuation doesn't matter! So i applaud you for this

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Demachic In reply to NeonIcing [2011-07-02 02:27:37 +0000 UTC]

; u ; Thank yoooooou!!

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NeonIcing In reply to Demachic [2011-07-02 02:31:42 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome I love your poetry, it's so fun to read ^^

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CaptainRumsz In reply to ??? [2011-05-15 12:06:56 +0000 UTC]

I can relate to this ; w ; My English teacher gave me a bad mark because I "don't speak properly". I stutter and slur my words a lot because of my accent and my teeth (I have an overcrowded mouth). It really hurt me that she found my voice so stupid.

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Demachic In reply to CaptainRumsz [2011-07-02 02:27:13 +0000 UTC]

Oh GOD, don't I know about that accent bother! My english teacher was actually from england so he didn't find my (irish) accent very good for english speaking D:

YOU'RE AWESOME. DON'T LISTEN TO WHAT THEY SAY GURL.

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Sachi0 In reply to ??? [2011-05-15 08:42:17 +0000 UTC]

You make beautiful poems. And I really like the way you present them

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Demachic In reply to Sachi0 [2011-07-02 02:25:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! ^^

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Sachi0 In reply to Demachic [2011-07-02 12:16:41 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. ^^

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AsianMuffin In reply to ??? [2011-05-15 06:51:56 +0000 UTC]

you make the cutest poems! ^.^ keep it up!!

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Demachic In reply to AsianMuffin [2011-07-02 02:25:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks C:

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Mioko06 In reply to ??? [2011-05-15 04:22:57 +0000 UTC]

LMAO. This poem is absolutely adorable!

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Demachic In reply to Mioko06 [2011-07-02 02:25:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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That-Finnish-Kid In reply to ??? [2011-05-15 02:33:54 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow...story of my life XD

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Demachic In reply to That-Finnish-Kid [2011-07-02 02:25:30 +0000 UTC]

haha ^^

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TheSkyIsPurple13 In reply to ??? [2011-05-15 00:19:32 +0000 UTC]

:ilikeitplz: I like your other poems better.
But this one describes me!!
You are very talented! U should be proud!
I love all the decor!!!

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Demachic In reply to TheSkyIsPurple13 [2011-07-02 02:25:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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TheSkyIsPurple13 In reply to Demachic [2011-07-02 02:36:48 +0000 UTC]

absolutely!! =]

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heroelle In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 23:40:47 +0000 UTC]

I really like your poems. Simple poems are often very cheesy, but you make it work. ^^

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Demachic In reply to heroelle [2011-07-02 02:25:16 +0000 UTC]

C:

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MagicKid11 In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 22:24:35 +0000 UTC]

I love your poems, they're so cute!

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Demachic In reply to MagicKid11 [2011-07-02 02:25:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ^o^

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ami-d-v In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 20:15:44 +0000 UTC]

i love it ^_^

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Demachic In reply to ami-d-v [2011-07-02 02:25:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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heather1129 In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 19:56:50 +0000 UTC]

Oh my, this is exactly me!

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Demachic In reply to heather1129 [2011-07-02 02:24:58 +0000 UTC]

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joyus-artist In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 19:53:32 +0000 UTC]

love it. I toatally agree, I can sometimes write poems though. But still this is great and I love it

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Demachic In reply to joyus-artist [2011-07-02 02:24:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you :3

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Teams--Black In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 19:33:11 +0000 UTC]

I love this I'm good at english, but this still applies to me! You're poems are so amazing <3

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Demachic In reply to Teams--Black [2011-07-02 02:24:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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ganda123 In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 19:22:33 +0000 UTC]

All yout poems are fantastic

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