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Demachic — Optimistic Heart

Published: 2011-05-10 20:29:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 78462; Favourites: 4653; Downloads: 261
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Omg you guys ; u ; I didn't think this poem would get such overwhelming response :'D I love you all


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Poem about being bad at writing and english literary related things. @u@

Misspellings and random comma placement makes the poem deeper ahahahaha

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Demachic In reply to ??? [2011-07-02 02:24:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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ganda123 In reply to Demachic [2011-07-02 15:31:36 +0000 UTC]

NP

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GotTwistedKnickers In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 19:11:37 +0000 UTC]

I like all of your poems. This one makes me smile

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Demachic In reply to GotTwistedKnickers [2011-07-02 02:24:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank yoooou C:

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Just-a-Silhouette In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 19:06:13 +0000 UTC]

This is great! So musical and bright and cheerful!

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Demachic In reply to Just-a-Silhouette [2011-07-02 02:24:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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hikaru-nara-kheel In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 18:43:02 +0000 UTC]

i write alot of poems but i got to say i'm so envous of your writing skills...i cant rhyme like you...xD...keep up the amazing work

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Demachic In reply to hikaru-nara-kheel [2011-07-02 02:24:24 +0000 UTC]

Ahw :') thank you so much!

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ElizabethDGreyWarden In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 18:31:58 +0000 UTC]

You give your poems musicality. :3

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Demachic In reply to ElizabethDGreyWarden [2011-07-02 02:24:09 +0000 UTC]

Ohw Thanks!!

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Estella-Sparkles In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 17:52:39 +0000 UTC]

i can realate 99% to it lol

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Demachic In reply to Estella-Sparkles [2011-07-02 02:24:01 +0000 UTC]

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IconicBritannia In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 17:47:16 +0000 UTC]

LOVE IT!!! <3

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Demachic In reply to IconicBritannia [2011-07-02 02:23:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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IldCat In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 17:36:30 +0000 UTC]

I sat reading it out loud to myself, and couldn't pronounce "pronunciation", and stammered at "stammer" ..
That scared me a bit

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Demachic In reply to IldCat [2011-07-02 02:23:55 +0000 UTC]

Haha aww!!

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Snoangel In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 14:15:46 +0000 UTC]

Ah, I love your poems! They're so simple and heartwarming; it's refreshing.

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Demachic In reply to Snoangel [2011-07-02 02:23:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you a lot

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susieboo22 In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 12:35:04 +0000 UTC]

how'd u make the background transparent?

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platinummyr In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 07:03:46 +0000 UTC]

This is cute <3

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Demachic In reply to platinummyr [2011-07-02 02:23:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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sparksfly25 In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 06:37:02 +0000 UTC]

so cute and amazing
mind if you tell me what font you used?thanks
nice work

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ShootingBlueStar13 In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 06:21:37 +0000 UTC]

<---My appearance both inside and outside Simple, short and to the point. Great poem.

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Demachic In reply to ShootingBlueStar13 [2011-07-02 02:23:20 +0000 UTC]

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Choxolip In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 00:27:53 +0000 UTC]

This made my day because this is my life :3

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Demachic In reply to Choxolip [2011-07-02 02:23:14 +0000 UTC]

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Lambii In reply to ??? [2011-05-13 17:20:13 +0000 UTC]

i find this very charming and original, very good ^^

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Demachic In reply to Lambii [2011-07-02 02:23:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you a lot! ; 3 ;

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Twiggeh-Leaf In reply to ??? [2011-05-13 16:10:45 +0000 UTC]

:0

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Demachic In reply to Twiggeh-Leaf [2011-07-02 02:22:57 +0000 UTC]

O:

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Skuldpt In reply to ??? [2011-05-13 15:07:14 +0000 UTC]

I found this here:[link]

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Demachic In reply to Skuldpt [2011-07-02 02:22:50 +0000 UTC]

AHHHHH

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Lamorien In reply to ??? [2011-05-13 14:36:01 +0000 UTC]

hahahahhahaa cute

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Demachic In reply to Lamorien [2011-07-02 02:23:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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OmgRee In reply to ??? [2011-05-13 12:31:53 +0000 UTC]

O: What's the font? it's so cute!

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lilian82us In reply to ??? [2011-05-13 07:21:48 +0000 UTC]

Creative

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Demachic In reply to lilian82us [2011-07-02 02:22:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Gwifitz In reply to ??? [2011-05-13 01:57:51 +0000 UTC]

Ouuhhh! You stammer too?

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Demachic In reply to Gwifitz [2011-07-02 02:22:35 +0000 UTC]

...sometimes ; u ;

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Gwifitz In reply to Demachic [2011-07-02 13:41:08 +0000 UTC]

At least it's not always

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Sarrisa In reply to ??? [2011-05-13 00:30:42 +0000 UTC]

Very nice!

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Demachic In reply to Sarrisa [2011-07-02 02:22:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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GATLACA In reply to ??? [2011-05-13 00:19:54 +0000 UTC]

Awww :3

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Demachic In reply to GATLACA [2011-07-02 02:22:22 +0000 UTC]

^_^

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OHSHCroxmysoxoff In reply to ??? [2011-05-12 23:04:21 +0000 UTC]

That's awesome. Totally faving this.

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Demachic In reply to OHSHCroxmysoxoff [2011-07-02 02:22:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you (:

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OHSHCroxmysoxoff In reply to Demachic [2011-07-03 03:51:35 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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MusicAgainstTheHeart In reply to ??? [2011-05-12 22:29:43 +0000 UTC]

Insperational and pretty!

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Demachic In reply to MusicAgainstTheHeart [2011-07-02 02:22:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Rayquario In reply to ??? [2011-05-12 17:03:31 +0000 UTC]

I love it !

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