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Demachic — Optimistic Heart

Published: 2011-05-10 20:29:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 78469; Favourites: 4653; Downloads: 261
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Omg you guys ; u ; I didn't think this poem would get such overwhelming response :'D I love you all


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Poem about being bad at writing and english literary related things. @u@

Misspellings and random comma placement makes the poem deeper ahahahaha

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Demachic In reply to ??? [2011-07-02 02:22:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!! ^^

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yukim4ru In reply to ??? [2011-05-12 13:23:29 +0000 UTC]

<3
What font iz zis?

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NuclearFusi0n In reply to ??? [2011-05-12 12:22:22 +0000 UTC]

love it!

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Demachic In reply to NuclearFusi0n [2011-07-02 02:22:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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NuclearFusi0n In reply to Demachic [2011-07-02 12:35:41 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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Plarzay In reply to ??? [2011-05-12 11:24:30 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is simple, witty and very effective. Love it.

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Demachic In reply to Plarzay [2011-07-02 02:22:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot C:

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hongchae In reply to ??? [2011-05-12 05:35:35 +0000 UTC]

Awww! ♥ I really like this poem, especially because while English is my native tongue, I was dyslexic and had to have speech therapy when I was little. These days, I am the biggest bookworm I know and people always compliment me on how well I pronounce my words and my "accent". So many think it's British when it's really just General American with some San Francisco slang!

I've also known a lot of people who knew English as a second language, and I always cheer them on, because I know how hard it is to learn it as well.

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Demachic In reply to hongchae [2011-07-02 02:21:54 +0000 UTC]

Wow! That's really great! I'm glad you're so into reading ; u ;
If I had a problem with learning like that I might have been put off it! O:

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hongchae In reply to Demachic [2011-07-02 05:02:21 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I have heard of a lot of people like that, but I'm lucky my parents and teachers supported me and made sure I got the tools I needed (and didn't listen to this doctor who thought I was ADHD).

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eruka-mitsuki In reply to ??? [2011-05-12 03:29:36 +0000 UTC]

this is a great poem

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Demachic In reply to eruka-mitsuki [2011-07-02 02:19:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ^^

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SerenaHale In reply to ??? [2011-05-12 01:08:50 +0000 UTC]

love it!! good job

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Demachic In reply to SerenaHale [2011-07-02 02:16:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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CreamTroll In reply to ??? [2011-05-12 00:46:15 +0000 UTC]

love it

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Demachic In reply to CreamTroll [2011-07-02 02:16:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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treeforest In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 23:19:52 +0000 UTC]

sounds like me! ^^

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Demachic In reply to treeforest [2011-07-02 02:16:43 +0000 UTC]

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CiarawrCathostrophe In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 21:24:38 +0000 UTC]

I lovvvvve it!!

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Demachic In reply to CiarawrCathostrophe [2011-07-02 02:16:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! ^^

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CiarawrCathostrophe In reply to Demachic [2011-07-02 21:17:45 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Pantheraleo9 In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 20:49:32 +0000 UTC]

I love this!!! so very much

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Demachic In reply to Pantheraleo9 [2011-07-02 02:16:26 +0000 UTC]

C:

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PanPan-Starr In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 20:38:16 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome, i found most fo what you said applies to me. I love to write stories but i'm bad at it and punctuation and grammar and spelling. this poem is awesome!

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Demachic In reply to PanPan-Starr [2011-07-02 02:16:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot ! ; u ;

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Umazes In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 20:34:25 +0000 UTC]

I love these kind of poems, they're so cute!

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Demachic In reply to Umazes [2011-07-02 02:16:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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ShankSilenzikilu In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 20:31:43 +0000 UTC]

What kind of awesome English class do you have?! In my English class, we never get to write stories or poems. We write essays.

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Demachic In reply to ShankSilenzikilu [2011-07-02 02:16:06 +0000 UTC]

Oooh essays @_@;;

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FifiIsBored In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 20:29:08 +0000 UTC]

so cute that poem just made me want to hug you

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Demachic In reply to FifiIsBored [2011-07-02 02:15:54 +0000 UTC]

Ahww ; u ;

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crystalofchaos In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 20:23:10 +0000 UTC]

it is one of the cutest and most well done discordant poems I've read in a long time. I love it ~<3

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Demachic In reply to crystalofchaos [2011-07-02 02:15:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot!!

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crystalofchaos In reply to Demachic [2011-07-02 02:18:57 +0000 UTC]

No problem dear <3

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Icepearl14 In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 20:22:58 +0000 UTC]

I love this!

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Demachic In reply to Icepearl14 [2011-07-02 02:15:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ^^

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Icepearl14 In reply to Demachic [2011-07-02 17:19:31 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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Anako-Kitsune In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 20:15:51 +0000 UTC]

this is so cute!!! *-*

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Demachic In reply to Anako-Kitsune [2011-07-02 02:15:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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witchcats In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 20:11:44 +0000 UTC]

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Demachic In reply to witchcats [2011-07-02 02:15:24 +0000 UTC]

8D

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IgnisAquaTerraAer In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 20:08:18 +0000 UTC]

This made me kind of happy

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Demachic In reply to IgnisAquaTerraAer [2011-07-02 02:14:59 +0000 UTC]

Ahww

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lemonluckyducky In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 20:06:55 +0000 UTC]

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Demachic In reply to lemonluckyducky [2011-07-02 02:14:49 +0000 UTC]

^^

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palmouth In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 20:02:45 +0000 UTC]

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Demachic In reply to palmouth [2011-07-02 02:14:38 +0000 UTC]

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HeartlessRenegade In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 19:44:47 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome!

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Demachic In reply to HeartlessRenegade [2011-07-02 02:14:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Vincent42491 In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 19:43:19 +0000 UTC]

This is VERY original and thought through. This was just amazing to read and had me chuckling. Excellent work

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