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denis2 — on a tiny line....II
Published: 2009-09-29 09:26:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 874; Favourites: 73; Downloads: 0
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Critique on this Artwork?
Difficult to do with this fine artist.
but ..,
My finger has a habit of deciding for me before my brain does.
I place my finger of the first thing that annoys me,
Mr left, the personage we see on the left.
I place my thumb over him, and I am looking at something completely different.
Try it.., Thumb in place, take it away, thumb in place, take it away ....
I place my hand over the distorted cloud formation and I decide that is better where it is.
I clean my screen, because there are several dark spots that have nothing to do with the photograph.
I like the tracks of the tyres. Two.
I like the two subjects.
I like the two backpacks on the beach.
Yet there is a distortion on the beach, right-hand side. as if the artist pulled a photoshop brush?
Or maybe I need to change my screen?
Or did I miss the photographer's message completely, and the figure is the central figure?
which is possible.
Either way, my little finger says..., he should not be there.
Try the 'my little finger says '?
Regards G.
music for image.
[link]
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Hi Gerald..thank you for this critique..
agree completely about that guy on left...but it will be to much work to remove him...
Cloud is not a cloud but kite on a line that hold that guy near backpacks...(which are not backpacks but some sort of huge skateboard-he use kite to drive around on that thing but he stop here to chat with third guy...)i think like on many websites problem is with picture size...
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A kite...,
how stupid of me, of course.
and the title........
"On a tiny line 2",
how could I have missed it.
(slaps himself hard)
I should pay more attention...., sorry.
However I have discovered the photoshop add-on called 'eliminator' for the uninvited figures in photographic frame [link]
Works all the time, 
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woha...what a interesting "plug in" for PS...as i have a eye-patch there ,tripod and some people want to call police when they see me there that is just what i need there...
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