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Published: 2007-08-18 02:54:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 243; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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Open your eyes to find out it was all a dream,Close your eyes in hope,
That the dreamy images of your dream.
Will return to your restless mind.
Hope dreams will fill your soul,
Instead of those horrifying nightmares,
Involving all the things you hate,
And all the things you fear.
Temptation and fear,
For the things that lay ahead,
In the doors that will open,
And let the dreams and the nightmares run free.
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Comments: 5
Jokerzwild69 [2007-08-25 04:32:34 +0000 UTC]
Great emotive stand points, seems kind of forced but still a good poem none the less
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DephtsofDespair In reply to Jokerzwild69 [2007-08-25 20:12:45 +0000 UTC]
Thanks :]
May I ask what you mean by 'forced' ? Not asking in a rude way, just got me curious :]
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rikuhottie263 [2007-08-18 03:03:30 +0000 UTC]
hmm, it's got a lot of mixed emotions. i like it ^^
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DephtsofDespair In reply to rikuhottie263 [2007-08-18 15:29:19 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. :]
never really realized the mix of emotions .
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