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5 Tips for Cultural Diversity in Writing
Chapter 7 “From Story to Art” – Section 4 “Diversity”
With Links to Supplementary Material
Diversity—it almost seems a trap word meant for snaring unwitting people into a political debate. But why is it important to writing? Many will argue that it is a means of political correctness, popularity, and seeming hip to all your liberal friends at the coffee shop. While coffee shop creds are pretty important, the real reason for creating a diversity of religion, nationality, culture, ethnicity, philosophy, sexual orientation, gender, economic background, and any other sort, is that it gives a new layer of depth and realism to anything you write. By understanding the specific ways in which to apply diversity so that it adds this depth, we can also learn how to use it to empower both our stories and our readers.
Tip 1: Take the time try to understand what creates diversity among humans, and what diversity really is.
What makes one person, people group, or group of sentient beings, different than another? The first and most basic element is physiological difference—whether gender, skin colors, physical build and muscle, perceived level of beauty, or a even different brain makeup. While these do not necessarily dictate a person's fate, depending on culture and the time in history, each of these affects the way a person is treated their entire life. This leads to the second factor, which is experience—the history of how one has been treated, has treated others, and had to cope with the many different sorts of difficulties in life. These coping mechanisms or adaptions to the world around us lead to the third step, when humans create a culture for teaching children how best to adapt to the same future struggles and dilemmas (or lack thereof). These teachings form beliefs in the minds of the children—the entire three-step process creating an infinite amount of diversity on all three levels of difference between humans. Understanding this process for each and every character and group of people, both fictional and real, will teach you to portray them with respect, empathy, and accuracy.
Tip 2: Emulate the complexity and depth of the real world by applying the same sorts of diversity to your fictional world.
Whether you are writing fantasy, sci-fi, modern fiction, or anything else, you should have people groups who believe, and act, and talk, look, and dress differently than others. This will reflect the truths of reality—leading to a believably complex world that the reader is familiar with. That doesn't mean that you have to make it an overarching theme that dominates the story. Just know your cultures and your subcultures based on the geographical space your characters happen to occupy during the story, know how those cultures believe and view one another, and allow this to be a consideration when they interact or perform actions in the story. And the more different perspectives that you engage throughout the story, the more deep and complex your story will have the potential to become.
Tip 3: Avoid tokens, and view characters in more complex terms.
A problem with modern storytelling are “token” characters: the token black friend, token Asian, token female love interest, token orc, token elf, token mother, token child, token gay, token lesbian, token football player, etc... These don't have to be inherently offensive stereotypes, just characters with little to no personality outside their label—only present in the story to “be fair” or because they could not be avoided in the setting. Remember that characters, just like people, are more than stereotypes and cultural traits. Traits that come from being part of a culture or subculture, while important, still only comprise a very small percent of the complex makeup that comprises any character or person. First and foremost in creating any character should be a consideration for their experiences, their choices, their desires, and their struggles—with culture serving as a bit of rosemary on top to help bring the flavors together.
Tip 4: Seek to humanize and find common ground within opposing groups.
When people think about diversity in writing, they often assume that it means picking a subculture that is being treated unfairly and showing how evil the people persecuting them are. This is neither accurate to the reality of the multifaceted nature of even people who do evil things, nor respectful towards the victims you patronized; and you will simply fuel embitterment between the two groups in real life. Tell the truth, but seek to find humanity and a common spirit that uplifts both subcultures beyond their hatred, and which shows that they are more alike than they are different. Pinpoint problems, yes, but also propose a true solution to those problems, with respect, and empathy, and understanding to all sides involved—even if some people are acting out of the less noble part of their nature.
Tip 5: Remember that you have a very diverse group of people on your side.
By portraying diversity in the subcultures and cultures listed above, and treating them with respect and thought, you will not get the angry mobs on your side. Some publishing companies might be confused as to why your characters are not under their approved list of token heroes, and refuse to publish your book. And, if you're really good at your job, you may even get dirty looks at your local coffee shop. But the reading community—the people who love truly good stories—are tired of limited perspectives, bigotry, and a rosy black and white view of the world. It may take time, and be more challenging, but you aren't alone. And the fame of that quality of story will not be able to be suppressed for long—including among the many people who share in the cultures that you treated with such understanding and respect.
I don't normally do this, but I highly encourage anybody who is interested in this topic or who would like to see it in practice to read “The Sea of Trolls” by Nancy Farmer. It is my all-time favorite book and has taught me more about the sort of writer that I want to become, than any other. I highly recommend it. And if you enjoy and learn from it as much as I did, feel free to let her know so I can get some brownie points with my favorite author
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Comments: 39
victoriaisaboy [2015-09-21 15:25:20 +0000 UTC]
I read somewhere about 'the rule of three'. Have three of the character to avoid tokenism. Three black people, three queer people, etc. It's a good way to avoid tokenism (as long as at least one of the characters is present for most of the book.) And have them pass the 'racial bechdel test'- your characters of color interact and talk without talking about or focusing on the/a white person.
Another thing I've come across is white people being afraid to write non-white characters because they don't want to offend anyone or get it wrong. This is a legitimate fear but not as hard a problem as it seems. The way most people see it is you can write POC without being one, but don't write about their feelings about and experiences with racism (which I'm assuming is where most of the controversy comes from). You will 9/10 get it wrong and offend people. People have a tendency to project their opinions. Like if you think racism is no big deal or doesn't exist anymore, and you have your character say that, it becomes painstakingly obvious that you are using that character as a mouthpiece. I've read books where the black character will tell someone that racism is dead or that 'they don't see color', and while there are black people who say these things and think it, I could tell it was written by a white/non black person of color. Just by the wording and the presentation of the words in the narrative. People of that racial or ethnic group will be able to tell.
And when I say don't write their experiences I don't mean never have anyone comment on their skin (as this does happen) moreso don't try and 'insert' yourself. For example, if you are not asian but your main character is, don't attempt to describe how devastated they felt when they busted their ass studying for your algebra test, and their friends brushed off the hard work it took to make an A because "you're asian, of course you're good at math". You do not know that complex experience and the emotions that go into the thought process unless you have experienced it. What I'm trying to say is, write as many brown characters as you like, but don't overstep. Same for writing religion, disability and gender. I've closed many a book because of male authors terrible 'strong female characters' and their attempt at making her sound like feminist when she really sounds like a mans poor attempt at a "revolutionary" character.
I hope I didn't babble, lol.
This is a fantastic list of tips and I really enjoyed reading it.
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DesdemonaDeBlake In reply to victoriaisaboy [2015-09-22 12:46:59 +0000 UTC]
Thank you And while you have given me way too much material for me to address everything in this comment without an essay, haha, let me just say that I do appreciate your input!
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diego2528 [2015-09-15 22:47:46 +0000 UTC]
This article is good and it bring me to one question: how you write *minority* villians? because let face, sometimes the villian is the best part of the show
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DesdemonaDeBlake In reply to diego2528 [2015-09-18 16:03:47 +0000 UTC]
May I ask what you mean by "minority" villains?
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diego2528 In reply to DesdemonaDeBlake [2015-09-19 01:25:43 +0000 UTC]
black,women,gay villians....that is what I mean.
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DesdemonaDeBlake In reply to diego2528 [2015-09-19 14:15:34 +0000 UTC]
The same way as any other villain, I would think. With depth, complexity, and believable motives. AHS season 3 does a good job of this.
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diego2528 In reply to DesdemonaDeBlake [2015-09-22 03:23:30 +0000 UTC]
its more dificult than that, usually minority have a lot of steriotype that for one reason or another people have used it.
Or too put it more easy way: people have hight expectation about why the villian is that way....that usually annoy a lot of people.
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ketsamachan [2015-08-30 00:25:24 +0000 UTC]
I'm sorry that my comments refuse to be as lengthy and in-depth as all the other comments, I guess, but it cannot be helped.
//shrug
I agree, though! Their culture, race, gender, etc. will be a defining factor for some of the things they'll do, but people will still have personalities of their own and—most importantly—we have lives of our own!
We've all been through the same things differently; falling in love may have been the greatest joy for the wife and mother who'd lived it well, but to a man who has lost his fiancé in an accident, love might be the worst thing ever!
What we've been through can control how we view things, and our experiences shape us the most drastically, don't they? Combined with our settings, they dictate how we think and act.
That's how I see it, anyway.
A person from a different culture may think differently regardless; we're brought up differently and taught differently. It's a given.
(Ohh, in the end, I managed to get this comment lengthy, too. Nice!)
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DesdemonaDeBlake In reply to ketsamachan [2015-08-30 02:31:30 +0000 UTC]
Yep And kudos on the long comment. Knew you had it in you
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loreshaper-kethal [2015-08-26 16:06:50 +0000 UTC]
Finally! I am very happy you wrote this.
The absolute best way we can encourage people to bring diversity into stories is by explaining how and why that can be an element that actually enhances the story itself.
I think of the best examples of a diverse story is Avatar: the last airbender. It had fantasy versions of various cultures, but none of the characters were defined soley by their heritage.
Even the villains of the fire nation were portrayed very humanisitically by showing how they were just as much victims of the war because they forced to fight by their fire lord/dictator Ozai.
The legend of Korra also had a lot of these good elements.
However we also need to be careful here. There already are people out there who will claim that your characters are tokens even if they are actually not.
There are also people out there who want to force others to shoehorn in diversity into a story even if that is not what said story is about.
Basically I think the main issue here is that a lot of people nowadays don't know that the best way to write a story is write it in a such a way that it truly feels like it's another world all it's own, with real people living in it.
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DesdemonaDeBlake In reply to loreshaper-kethal [2015-08-26 21:01:31 +0000 UTC]
I'm very glad you enjoyed.
And yes, it is a very difficult topic to deal with in each of our stories, as well as a difficult set of skills to learn to do it correctly. I guess that's what we sign on for if we want to become storytellers, though, haha.
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KitsuneDzelda [2015-08-13 00:05:03 +0000 UTC]
Hmmmm.... good points you have there. Lately Ive been searching for tips on my main book on what to do about diversity in this society Ive taken a couple years to develop; Im alway glad when I find these helpful entries on the subject. ^^
But how odd is it that when you try to portray life in all its facets, you get people who dont like the view in the kaliedoscope, whereas some will exclaim at its brilliance.... I suppose when making a book while devoloping its culture you should realize humanity whom your basing it off of has just as many opinions as your book should.
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DesdemonaDeBlake In reply to KitsuneDzelda [2015-08-14 15:07:09 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!
Yeah... I think it just come from a politically polarized culture. If we add other points of view, people will automatically assume we have some sort of agenda because that's what they've been trained to pick out of any book/form of media.
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diego2528 [2015-08-12 18:54:56 +0000 UTC]
"it almost seems a trap word meant for snaring unwitting people into a political debate"
ahhhhh I call exactly that: the diversity death trap, when a writer trying to not look racist or ignorant, piss off people because not matter what, SOMEONE will find insensitive what they do or demand more, not because his skill but because human nature is more complicated that any fiction could do
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DesdemonaDeBlake In reply to diego2528 [2015-08-12 21:24:19 +0000 UTC]
Yes, people will get offended no matter what a writer does. But if you know you did the best possible job in treating others with respect and dignity, people who have a lick of intelligence will see it. And the others... well... do you really want their approval anyways? haha
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diego2528 In reply to DesdemonaDeBlake [2015-08-14 02:11:04 +0000 UTC]
this tie back to the old dilema: listen the critics or not? are you sticking to your term or being stubborn?
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DesdemonaDeBlake In reply to diego2528 [2015-08-14 02:44:41 +0000 UTC]
haha, exactly. I'm the stubborn sort.
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Greatkingrat88 [2015-08-12 09:07:58 +0000 UTC]
This is a really useful entry, as I've been wanting to make the story I'm writing more diverse. Problem is... tokens were my first idea even though I know it's an inferior method. I'm just not confident enough in my writing skills to think I can actually emulate the complexity of the real world. How does one even do that in the form of writing?
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DesdemonaDeBlake In reply to Greatkingrat88 [2015-08-12 16:24:13 +0000 UTC]
Well, it is extremely difficult and requires many drafts and lots of practice (I'm still not a master of it by far). I think the trick is knowing when your characters and world are still not sufficiently complex, deep, realistic, or skillfully crafted, and just never giving up until you have played with it and dissected it and analyzed it to the point that it is what it should be. I guess it's just like the other difficult aspects of writing... a lot of work and revision. If you start at tokens, gradually try to peel off the token attributes and create a character that can exist without the labels. And don't be hard on yourself for the level you have to start at in order to get better.
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Greatkingrat88 In reply to DesdemonaDeBlake [2015-08-14 12:57:05 +0000 UTC]
The closest thing I have at the moment is racial tension between elves and humans- they both hate each other, for reasons related to historical conflicts. How can I get this across without seeming exaggerated?
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DesdemonaDeBlake In reply to Greatkingrat88 [2015-08-14 15:09:16 +0000 UTC]
I would just make it a subtle thing that is revealed through actions--humans and elves going out of their way not to speak to one another, work together, etc... Or you could have them clash with subtle insults and such.
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Shaudawn [2015-08-12 03:11:11 +0000 UTC]
This is a great and important topic. Thanks for writing it!
There is also one thing I'm aware of: When people from the mainstream culture describe others, the traits that make the writer different from the character they are writing about tend to stand out. For example, white writers will write about a character's dark skin color, but make no mention of it with characters whose skin color may also be white. So much of it is subconscious.
I'm just aware of it, but it screams to me now when I see it. It's not necessarily "bad" to mention another character's skin color, nor necessary to label every character's physical attributes like ticking off a long laundry list (eyes, hair, skin color...eyes, hair, skin color...lather, rinse, repeat...), but it's something to be aware of, I think.
Anyway, an unsolicited , but I hope I'm contributing to the conversation.
As always, keep up the amazing work. I relish your submissions.
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DesdemonaDeBlake In reply to Shaudawn [2015-08-12 16:19:40 +0000 UTC]
That is an excellent point, and one I may need to address in the next draft of this article Thank you for reading and taking the time to give some feedback.
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LilacJayStudios [2015-08-11 21:42:13 +0000 UTC]
It somehow feels good to recognize some points you already care about and figured out by youself in these solid tips! This does not only apply to writing but also in your all day life that you should avoid generalizing as often as possible and approach people with an open mind! Well said and summed up, by the way.
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sakura4568 [2015-08-11 21:38:50 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for this and I agree with everything you said. This also applies to stereotypical parents: Mom is always there for the child or children and the dad is always absent or drunk. I'm only going off of my personal experience when I say this so I don't think that parents shouldn't fall under stereotypes too.
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DesdemonaDeBlake In reply to sakura4568 [2015-08-11 22:00:38 +0000 UTC]
Yep, I definitely agree
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HobbyWriter [2015-08-11 20:21:33 +0000 UTC]
Token mother (stereotypical mother)... I am sure this doesn't fully apply to a mother that is kind and loving, but can also make her son afraid of her? (In a humorous way of course, like a scary cartoon-mom.)
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DesdemonaDeBlake In reply to HobbyWriter [2015-08-11 20:24:34 +0000 UTC]
Well those are two traits for the mother. I think to get her outside the realm of "token" she has to have an identity outside of being a certain type of mother.
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HobbyWriter In reply to DesdemonaDeBlake [2015-08-11 21:24:51 +0000 UTC]
Foreigner, scary, respected, infamous, kick-ass warrior...?
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HobbyWriter In reply to DesdemonaDeBlake [2015-08-11 22:09:35 +0000 UTC]
"Her oak-colored hair was braided tightly, her stern brown eyes closed witha gentle smile. Her face, though it showed her age, seemed as young as Koriame's own. Some women were described as beauties compared to roses, and she was no different - she even seemed to have her own set of thorns. Her strong, bronze tan arms were crossed over her chest, elegant yet muscular; she smiled, but Koriame bet she didn't have any problem sending a troublemaker or an annoyance head-first through an open window."
How was that description?
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DesdemonaDeBlake In reply to HobbyWriter [2015-08-11 22:12:56 +0000 UTC]
Well what aspect of the description are you asking about, in particular?
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HobbyWriter In reply to DesdemonaDeBlake [2015-08-11 22:15:21 +0000 UTC]
I am not sure, really. Generally, I think. There's difficult to condense a description, but it's funny to try. I guess that's what I wanted.
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DesdemonaDeBlake In reply to HobbyWriter [2015-08-12 01:47:08 +0000 UTC]
I would condense by cutting comparisons and just giving a striking and vivid description. Also, it would make her seem more memorable if there were some striking feature that made her unique.
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