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designedevil — Porcelain
Published: 2011-05-16 20:42:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 259; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 2
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PorcelainDeath is branded on your immaculate features
The solemn perfection is what preaches
"I am a God I am a Goddess"
A delicate and fragile shell is what holds you
Then inside there is nothing solid
A fracture and the result is horrid.
Your expression is frozen perfect and sublime
Your simple existence is a crime…
"I am the ruler you're the clown"
A porcelain doll placed in a desolate shrine
When I look at you terror runs down my spine
Your humanity is lost in material too fine.
Your cruelty I want to break, I want to take
Drown your beauty in a polluted lake…
"I am the master and you're my slave"
Your destruction is what I endlessly crave.
Your insolent serenity is destined to fall
My beloved humanoid porcelain doll…
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Comments: 18
love it.
just a little thing that botters me, not negative in any way just saying. try giving it more of a flow like a beginning and an end, this is ofcourse what I would do, but you are not me so do as you wish.
love it
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i was going for duality, left it hanging in the air to reflect the indecisiveness of the person (kill the doll, don't kill the doll)
glad you like it
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i loved it, you are actually a really good writer so maybe write more
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i have some 50 poems or so, and i do write new ones, i just don't want to post them at the same time since then i wouldn't have any chance at getting some reviews
i had short stories 2 but they got lost due to pc error and a stupid cd *sigh*
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life can be though just fight and wait for the sun to rise
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I love how the doll is tortured and killed in many ways but in the end she is still a "beloved humanoid porcelan doll
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to kill or not to kill
--in short ^_^
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This dilemma is sometime sooo troublesome
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go eat something and let your a"s" grow mwahahaha XD
it is isn't it
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My ass is already big, and the "s" ...well we must imagine it there since I left it out and I am not hungry at the present moment
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eh? you... not hungry? *shakes you* are you alright? want me to call an ambulance? *shakes you again*
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No I am not and stop shaking me! *holds up the shield again*
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*cuts you down with a sword*
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