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DeTea — You Are Like The Word: Melancholy

Published: 2012-10-02 22:52:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 414; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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Description I like for you to be still
It is as though you are absent
And you hear me from far away
And my voice does not touch you
It seems as though your eyes had flown away
And it seems that a kiss had sealed your mouth
As all things are filled with my soul
You emerge from the things
Filled with my soul
You are like my soul
A butterfly of dream
And you are like the word: Melancholy

I like for you to be still
And you seem far away
It sounds as though you are lamenting
A butterfly cooing like a dove
And you hear me from far away
And my voice does not reach you
Let me come to be still in your silence
And let me talk to you with your silence
That is bright as a lamp
Simple, as a ring
You are like the night
With its stillness and constellations
Your silence is that of a star
As remote and candid

I like for you to be still
It is as though you are absent
Distant and full of sorrow
So you would've died
One word then, One smile is enough
And I'm happy;
Happy that it's not true

—Pablo Neruda
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Comments: 17

nykol-haebrd [2012-10-08 22:10:30 +0000 UTC]

I like the mood in this one, suggested by the title.

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DeTea In reply to nykol-haebrd [2012-10-08 23:12:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Nicole

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nykol-haebrd In reply to DeTea [2012-10-08 23:53:59 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome!

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pinturaluil [2012-10-06 06:17:21 +0000 UTC]

Nice work !Pretty colors:

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DeTea In reply to pinturaluil [2012-10-06 12:06:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Jo

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pinturaluil In reply to DeTea [2012-10-06 16:02:35 +0000 UTC]

Welcome Doug :

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Undead-Academy [2012-10-03 13:23:45 +0000 UTC]

Nice one looks like an slice of orange

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DeTea In reply to Undead-Academy [2012-10-03 14:55:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Undead-Academy In reply to DeTea [2012-10-03 14:56:20 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure

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mistersingh [2012-10-03 06:58:06 +0000 UTC]

Looking good

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DeTea In reply to mistersingh [2012-10-03 12:38:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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mistersingh In reply to DeTea [2012-10-04 06:19:31 +0000 UTC]

Welcome

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fraterchaos [2012-10-02 22:59:02 +0000 UTC]

wonderful work

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DeTea In reply to fraterchaos [2012-10-02 23:00:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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fraterchaos In reply to DeTea [2012-10-03 00:07:00 +0000 UTC]

always welcome

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Lady-Compassion [2012-10-02 22:53:41 +0000 UTC]

Touching words....beautiful fractal.....

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DeTea In reply to Lady-Compassion [2012-10-02 22:58:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Jenny!
I started this one by trying to tweak your parameters for Home World Locust but everything I made looked terrible. I started over with a blank slate and used similar variations: Rings2 and Julian. So, thank you!

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