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detonatingUnicorn In reply to kayyeh1 [2014-12-09 02:11:39 +0000 UTC]

Her hands were supposed to be over the center of her chest, not her heart. It just happens that I acidentally made them more so one direction than the other. I really don't like this picture anymore though, and now am aware of even more mistakes.

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kayyeh1 In reply to detonatingUnicorn [2014-12-09 12:17:15 +0000 UTC]

no way its still awesome why you no like no more?

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detonatingUnicorn In reply to kayyeh1 [2014-12-09 16:35:35 +0000 UTC]

Pixals face is really ugly and Zane's build is terrible.

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kayyeh1 In reply to detonatingUnicorn [2014-12-09 20:53:18 +0000 UTC]

BZZZZZZZ! incorrect! i tink zane looks really good and while pixal could use  some touch ups id say it a really good drawing. btw i WISH that was my best drawing. have you seen my stuff? the shadows look like dirt splotches and i can't put my finger on why but it just doesn't look as professional as some of deviant art. and I'm only talking about peoples SKETCHES! btw this is a   for me

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detonatingUnicorn In reply to kayyeh1 [2014-12-10 20:21:44 +0000 UTC]

Nah man, your arts good, seriously, it's better than mine was two years ago. For shading I don't really know what to say, it looks like you do pretty fine, you've just got to do it right. Also with shadows underneath people, they are almost never just a circle just a piece of advice. I'd just say seriously look at shadows and focus on them alone for a while. Look at how they lay on things differently. Honestly I'm not that great with shadows myself right now and am still working on them. Also, not trying to make you feel bad or anything but your anatomy on some of your art is a little off. Honestly, I'd have to recommend tracing. Seriously. That's how I learned. I would print out a bunch of pictures and draw on top of them. Break them down into different shapes. Heck, I even have my sisters make poses I want some times so I can take a photo, print it out and trace on them to get a feel on more complicated and hard to find poses. I would Google Posemaniacs if you want to look at poses. The website is amazing and they have thousands of poses of different body types and genders that you can rotate and look at from different angles. Eventually the habit of tracing the shapes will become natural and you can draw the people from scratch without tracing anything and create your own poses. I even did that for shading. Trace folds in fabric and how the shadows form on them. You can even trace other people's art to get a feel on more cartoony styles, just don't post any of the tracing 'cus that's stealing and makes people upset.
Honestly though, you're on the right track really, keep up the good work!

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kayyeh1 In reply to detonatingUnicorn [2014-12-10 22:03:09 +0000 UTC]

im not offended at all. im always looking to improve. when you draw something and then take a step back it looks really good, but someone else can see what you cant because you think it looks good. yah i know my anatomy is pretty bad. do you mind telling me specificly in some of my drawings though? that would really help!

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detonatingUnicorn In reply to kayyeh1 [2014-12-10 23:55:15 +0000 UTC]

Ah well, I really didn't get to look at too much of your art, but enough to get a general idea of your style I think. The ones I'm talking about the most are your Power Puff Buttercup and Bubbles and Levitation.

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kayyeh1 In reply to detonatingUnicorn [2014-12-11 01:28:13 +0000 UTC]

yeah i did think something was off about that one.... btw the buttercup and bubbles isn't mine, in the description it says that the drawings were a friends i just colored it

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detonatingUnicorn In reply to kayyeh1 [2014-12-11 16:31:28 +0000 UTC]

Ah, alright. Sorry about that, I didn't really get it go through and read any of the descriptions, I just scrolled through your gallery a bit.

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kayyeh1 In reply to detonatingUnicorn [2014-12-11 20:51:34 +0000 UTC]

Cool.... I honestly have no idea how good my stuff is cause I don't get many watchers......

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