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WanderingKotka [2005-02-19 23:27:03 +0000 UTC]

Very nicely drawn, you are correct, he is hawt. Even though I do not like smokers, he is hot.

My critique is that the way you've drawn his mouth gives the impression that he has a hare lip, also, something seems to be off about the right eye, but I cannot tell what. Other than that it is a lovely piece, with great depth to the lineart.

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Visioku [2005-02-19 15:18:46 +0000 UTC]

I adore your inking!
so I guess he took away your drawing-cigarettes virginity

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Iyou [2005-02-19 05:09:03 +0000 UTC]

I love his hair and the expression! x_x! I agree that he's hot. XD You always do really cool ink pieces.

Since critiques are encouraged, I guess I'll say that his mouth bothers me a tiny bit. The line on the top of his mouth swoops up towards the bottom of his nose, which makes it seem like he has a bit of a cleft lip. I think all that you'd need to do to fix it would be to move his mouth a little lower, making it not so close to the nose.

Hope that helps!

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Munia [2005-02-18 23:10:40 +0000 UTC]

¡Hala, está fumando, tienes que ponerle el mature content! XDDD La nariz es lo que veo un poco raro, y quizás la forma del cráneo (pero también puede ser cosa del peinado). Me gusta mucho la expresión pensativa del chico. ^-^

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