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deuxia-devonair — Loaa - For Zephyree
Published: 2005-04-02 00:53:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 166; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 24
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This is ~zephyree 's character, Loaa. I felt so happy while drawing this, I think you can notice. I wanted her to look feminine and playful, and to keep all the lovely details of her clothing. I love her characters, and it was my pleasure to draw this as a part of an art trade with her.I didn't ink her as heavy as I do normally, I thought she would lose some of her outgoing personality.
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aww the border is so cute! I love it! It sets the piece off so well, and the hair of her is also cute! It's really well done and I love the pose.
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Thank you!!! n_n Zephyree has lovely character designs.
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Yeah great pic and great inking !
Mmm i think the anatomy is correct maybe too long ( cause i calcul and it's around 7 heads and half) maybe the legs are too long
I think like kabukikatze that the hand is too small.
and for the foot, the only thing who bothers me is that they don't look like really on the floor, maybe you could just do a curb more on the shoes and not only on one side of the shoes, ( so we could see perspective of the shoes), or maybe cause the legs are too straight or too symetrical and it makes me feel that 
Anyway otherwise it looks very kewl, the bg is so cute !
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Thanks a lot for this useful comment, dear! I noticed about the feet to late..
And yes, I draw very long legs.. I am too influenced my anime...
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lool ^_^ but it's your style
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As always, beautiful, clean linework. You must have a very steady hand. I couldn't do a good ink if my life depended on it! I think you're definately drawing breasts better than you were when I first started watching you ^.~ Before they were a little too high and unnatural-looking--you're starting to draw them more naturally and that's awesome! Any maybe it's just the Anime-style, but her face on the right side of the pic looks almost like her cheek/eye get a little lost...aside from that though, very excellent!
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Hehehe.. I need to draw more realitically, you are right! 
I have to keep on stalking Mxie so she can teach me more about anatomy when drawing...
Thanks for commenting!
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Lovely! You managed to convey her open, easy personality very well. She just looks cheerful to me. The semi-flowery border helps this along, too. I don't have much in the way of critique, I love her pose and clothing, her anatomy looks dead-on, and you inked her wonderfully. The only error I can actually find is that I think her hand is a touch too small, but this may be because I can only see a little bit of it.
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Thanks! I liked to do the border, and I thought that if I made it a straight line, it would loose something... it wouldn't be the same without the border.
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Uh! Get me an outfit like that one!
Se ve muy bien, la verdad con las lineas y todo, si le dieras color con fondo como azul se veria como un manuscrito iluminado.
Me encanta!!
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Gracias gracias!! Pero esto nunca se coloreara.. al menos yo no le dare color. Y si le diera, no se cual le daria porque los colores que ~zephyree le dio (su creadora) son como verdes, y cremas.
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