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Published: 2014-03-06 16:04:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 1918; Favourites: 166; Downloads: 0
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"So what did you want to show me?"
"Hope."
In a future where there seems to be none left, a young girl discovers the importance of hope and how something small can make a difference.
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Hi guys! Here's the flash comic about the story for my school project!
This flash comic is intended to spread awareness about our environment, and that we humans are harming it, in a way that children as well could understand, which is inspired by ROTG and yuumei .
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You're very welcome!
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Devina!!! THIS IS SO AMAZING.Β I really liked this!! * o * I honestly got goosebumps. I was expecting beautiful art, but I also got a great story out of this. I can definitely see the inspiration yuumei was for you. ^^ If you plan on doing anything else with this in the future, I would LOVE to see more! Just thinking about it makes me want to start doodling Skye and Gaea. > v <
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OH BY THE WAY
I FORGOT TO ASK
a-are you joining in for the raffle? ouo
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Sure! 8D I hope it isn't too much trouble, but could you send me the raffle information please? ^^
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Y-YOU THINK SO? AMG REALLY? THANK YOU SO SO SO MUCH! That means a lot to meee TTuTT
Ahhh really? amg--- I would really really love to do something for the future like this (maybe a continuation of the story when the girl grows up, or the back story of the human? XD Or maybe something completely unrelated, I dunno~ hahaha) Y-You can go ahead and do that if you'd like >u< I'd really love to see them in your style!
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You're very welcome!! > v <Β
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I really like the story gosh
Β the plot was really good and it would be awesome if you made more like these~
i like how it kind of goes to this ending of no hope and how the mother shows her that there is hope to have a happy ending and a way to save the earth and aiusdhksd i really like it
// omg but im not sure if i got the message right or something like ahh i would feel really stupid if i did///
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OH BY THE WAY
I FORGOT TO ASK
a-are you joining in for the raffle? ouo
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Oh yeah sure! Ill make a journal too hahah
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You don't have to but sure thing owo/Β
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AMG Y-YOU DO?
Ah-- you really think so? Ahh--- If only I had more time and ideas in my hand, then I probably would
Yaaay! I'm so glad you like it dlaskghjskdjhg--- ><
sdkajghkasjg-- of course you did >< and you're not even close to stupid dalskghjaksdjg--
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HASH YES I DID
I REALLY LIKE THE DESIGNS TO GOSH I LOVE SKYE ACTUALLY HAHA// he so fabulous
sjejdb lol ok that's good lol
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KSJAHG AMG YOU'RE TOO NICE
AAAHH--- REALLY AMG--- I THOUGHT IT WAS TOO SIMPLE AND STUFF KJAGHKJLG---
HAHA I'M GLAD YOU LIKE IT THOUGH ><Β
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So pretty! 
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Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it~
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Very nice. I love the soft colors and shading in this. The introduction with the mother and daughter is also very effective, as is the ending. In fact, their interactions are probably the best part of this. It really gets you invested, wondering what happened to make their world as it is, but also seeing how they deal with it. The story the mother tells could be a bit more polished though. It's a bit preachy. I mean, no, people are not intentionally trying to destroy the sky and rule the universe. I don't know, maybe some nutty people are, but your villain very clearly represents all of humanity in general, and really, malice towards the earth and universe isn't the problem. Ignorance is. The story would be a lot more effective and believable I think if the destruction was accidental, as is realistic. That aside, I did really enjoy reading this, and looking at your wonderful artwork. I hope you get a great grade on this.
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Thank you so much! I thought that it made the story too long, though ;3;
Mm... That's quite true, but I thought it would kind of add to the dramatic effect... I might try to make another part of this story instead of leaving it as a one shot where it shows the tale of the human, and make it seem that he's less of a bad guy and that what he's doing isn't on purpose~ Maybe, hahaha~
Mmm, yeah, I agree with you. People have been told countless times, yet it's either we don't understand how grave the situation is, or we really don't care. Kinda makes me disappointed in the human race...
I'm really glad you liked it, though! And thank you so much >< I hope I do, too!
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Even with only two words, those two words give you a deeper feeling of the artworks...
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Two words? Err--- thanks, I guess! I hope you liked it ><
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Whoops! I posted that comment before I figured outΒ it was aΒ comic and how to start it.
It was a really nice story line and plot. I liked how you brought up how us as humans
as a whole are using the earth way too much for our own selfish desires. How it's hurting those around us.
Again I posted that comment WAY too soon...
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Oh I see hahaaha~
I'm really glad that you liked it! ouo
It's alright, that's no problem~
If I'm not mistaken, I've only given you one slot for the journal, yes?Β
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Yes... I think so. I commented on the flash comic, I posted a journal about the raffle... IDK, horrible memory and too lazy to look at the rules again...
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Ahaha alright then! I'm giving you 3 slots in total (comment, fave, and journal) owo/ Good luck~
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I love the shadows and lighting in this. Good job!
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Ah--- really? Thank you so much ;////; I'm glad you liked it
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Thank you! I'm glad you do~
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I've never read a flash comic before, and I'm glad this was my first. Your art was wonderful and I really liked your story. But it cut off... and now I need more -___-
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Y-You haven't?! You should totally check out yuumei 's then >< Hers are sooo good dsjklhglkg---
Thank you so much, by the way >< I'm glad you liked it! But I was wondering, what did you mean by it got "cut off"? ouo
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"Cut off" as in my internet was on the fritz so I couldn't see the ending 
And thank you fr the suggestion, I'll go check her out!!
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Oh >< Dang it, that was a shame ono I hope you'll find time to read it!
You're very welcome! She's one of the largest inspirations I used for this flash comic >< Her work is fantastic, though!
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I love the story! The characters were all drawn very well, too! Very good job, it's beautiful~!
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Y-You did? Thank you so much!! lskjadhglakdgsh---
Are you joining the raffle, shadow? ouo
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This comic is very interesting~ owo I really like the storyline, and it cut off! ;3; I hope that you get a good grade on this .w.Β
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Thaanks! I'm glad you liked it!! What do you mean it cut off, though? XD
I hope so, too! Thank you so much >π: 0 β©: 1
Well, it was very interesting and it just... pulls you in ;w; Then, it sort of leaves off, making me want to see what happens next~ >u< <3
Anytime! 83 <3
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Ah, thank you so much! That's such a great compliment ><Β
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This really is beautiful. And sadly true... But it's one of those things meant to make people think, right? I'm happy I read this, and I hope a lot of people can; maybe it'll help do something 8D
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Thanks so much! Yeah, it kinda is haha~ I was trying to spread awareness about the environment and thought this might be good >< I'm really glad you liked it! I hope so too~
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Aww! How nice! Literally :'3
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