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Published: 2018-04-22 03:14:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 643; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 0
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Now would Altmann be Vlad's evil twin or his dad?ΒI mean, Vlad is basically a clone of Altmann,but with alien DNA in him.Β
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I love his expression, and the composition of the piece is quite good, this angle really gives an creepy vibe. My biggest critique would be that I find (it's personal though) the colours to lack a bit of contrast in the eyes and the hair lack details, it kinda clashes with the rest of the face. Other than that, it's pretty good !
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AYYYY thank you for the feedbacc
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This one really caught my eye! I love how close his face is the "camera". It does well to give off an ominous and uncomfortable feeling to the viewer. You have done very well on the shadows in this piece. Going with strong and sharp shadows adds to the ominous expression of this man. I love the rough painting style as well. I think the cheekbones and the bulge above his left eyebrow are done exceptionally well.Β
I think using thinner lines for the hair would be a nice touch, however I am not certain how this will affect your style. Maybe perhaps if you made it look a little more greasier or dirtier it may help with the character?Β
Anyway, I think it is a great piece. I am sorry that I do not have much to say as I may be biased with style and subject matter haha. Keep at it!
~Ced
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Lmao thank.
Also wat you mean you biased lmaooo
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No problem.
I like creepy characters/subject matter so it all looks great to me. It was a good thing
~Ced
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The coloration, and the blending is good here ; not a bad piece of work here, andΒ you can see the effort.Β Now, in my opinion though, it does not exude that feeling of total horror. My suggestion : why don't you try to darken the left side of the face ? It looks like the lighting is from the right anyway. Also, maybe a little bit more perspective, and it would be a little bit better !
Anyway, it's a nice piece of work !
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Ayy. Thanks for the feedback.
And I went back and did some editing.
I decreased the saturation and increased the contrast.Β
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Overall, this is a very impressive piece! The expression and pose is very dynamic, the contrast is generally very well executed, and the exaggerated anatomy is striking! It's quite a revolting piece in a good way, and it makes the viewer very uncomfortable when looking at it. So let me cut the crap and get to what you're probably here for - what can be improved? While the piece is very strong overall, I think there are a few aspects that could be improved. For one, the colors are a bit weak. I think the blue of the eyes doesn't form enough contrast agains the purple tones - teal, or even something more yellowish could've worked better. The blonde hair could've been made more vibrant so that it looks less natural and more eerie, and it could've been rendered with more solid strokes and less lines. Aside from that, the background could have more interesting contrast, but that's it! Very well done.
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Ayyyy, thanks for the feedback. I really needed it.
Also I went ahead and did some editing and this is the result.
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The colors and contrast areΒ *a m a z i n g* This entire piece looks awesome.
But its kinda flat, try rounding out the shading in areas like the cheeks and mouth?
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