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Published: 2010-08-05 22:43:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 1681; Favourites: 47; Downloads: 11
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Description Few days passed since Vlad became leader and took his father’s place,and yet again Nigel came back home drunk.Vlad was lying on his favorite place by the window when his stomach started rumbling loudly.
-Hungry already?Why don’t you find something to eat for your starving family,oh great leader?-Nigel said with a big grin on his muzzle.After that little meerkat jumped off the window-sill and slowly went to the hole in wall.
-Are you out of your mind?!-Vlad’s mom hit drunken meerkat’s empty head.-He doesn’t know how to hunt yet and..And just look at the weather.Heavy rain!
-Shup up woman..If he expected his daddy to keep hunting for food-then he’s a fool!
As two grownups kept yelling at each other,Vlad already went for a hunt and had no idea what to do.He realized though that he could easily become food for someone else.But he couldn’t let that happen,not before he proves that he didn’t become leader just for nothing.It was hard for him to sense something since the rain erased all the tracks and smells.But then his sight caught a movement near the trash cans.Vlad waited patiently for it to come out,and so it did.It was a black street rat with a size of an adult meerkat.Young leader didn’t want to waste his time and attacked the rat while it was looking on the other side.For the first time he failed.Rat was faster and stronger and soon both of them changed roles.Vlad was running away through unknown streets,unseen buildings and lanes.But suddenly he stopped and turned back to face the rat.He jumped over it and stared at it’s back.The vermin was confused and didn’t get what just happened.Vlad used this moment and bit it’s bare tail.After that he started to hit the rat by the ground in order to smash it’s head and kill it.
-Looks like that little bastard isn’t coming back.Oh that poor thing..-Said Nigel with sarcasm and laid on Vlad’s favorite place.When he looked through the window his mouth opened wide and meerkat became sober from surprise.Vlad was heading to his home pulling rat by the tail with him.He saw astonished Nigel and smiled.
-Happy to see me,daddy?

So here it is..

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Comments: 46

RaptorsRtheBest [2024-09-13 04:06:50 +0000 UTC]

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MiKeiLo [2010-08-24 12:56:59 +0000 UTC]

Very good, Vlad !

P.S. : I luv the story

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DevaPein In reply to MiKeiLo [2010-08-24 13:00:03 +0000 UTC]

Yay,someone knows my name xD

Thanks x)

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MiKeiLo In reply to DevaPein [2010-08-24 13:10:33 +0000 UTC]

I want us to be best friends if you want too

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DevaPein In reply to MiKeiLo [2010-08-24 13:14:16 +0000 UTC]

We'll see,people become best friends not just for nothing :3

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MiKeiLo In reply to DevaPein [2010-08-24 13:16:32 +0000 UTC]

lol I want to know more about you to know what kind of friend you are can you give me some informations about you and I'll give you some informations about me ?

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DevaPein In reply to MiKeiLo [2010-08-24 13:19:39 +0000 UTC]

Well there is some information in this deviation ^::^ [link]
If you have any questions then go on :3

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SleepyImagination [2010-08-06 23:30:57 +0000 UTC]

awww what a good boy -w-

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DevaPein In reply to SleepyImagination [2010-08-07 07:42:16 +0000 UTC]

I know -w-

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labramazing [2010-08-06 13:57:04 +0000 UTC]

How do you make the rain so nice?

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DevaPein In reply to labramazing [2010-08-06 13:58:21 +0000 UTC]

Magic..

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labramazing In reply to DevaPein [2010-08-07 02:30:03 +0000 UTC]

lol

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Aariina [2010-08-06 10:01:02 +0000 UTC]

"Wytrzeźwiał ze zdziwienia" - to mnie rozbroiło xD
Fajna historia (oraz tło) ^^

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DevaPein In reply to Aariina [2010-08-06 10:02:13 +0000 UTC]

Prawda?XD
Mógł bym napisać lepiej ale byłem senny i głodny xD

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Aariina In reply to DevaPein [2010-08-06 10:05:58 +0000 UTC]

Nom, zauważyłam parę błędów, ale i tak nie jest złe ^^

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DevaPein In reply to Aariina [2010-08-06 10:07:20 +0000 UTC]

Choć tak xD

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Hamadashi [2010-08-06 01:02:04 +0000 UTC]

hooray for vlad!!! he dumbounded his dad!!!! awsome pic^^

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DevaPein In reply to Hamadashi [2010-08-06 06:55:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks x)

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Hamadashi In reply to DevaPein [2010-08-06 14:59:33 +0000 UTC]

np deva-senpai^^

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FlamingSpartanWolf [2010-08-05 23:50:47 +0000 UTC]

XD I love this! You did a great job on the background, along with the rain. And Vlad's expression just screams, "Yeah, look what I caught, mother fucker!"
The story behind it was also awesome!
I used to write a lot, but lately I've lost my feel. . . I'm not sure if anyone else is like this, but I need to be feeling a certain emotion to write. . .

Just haven't been able to write lately. I'm hoping that'll change when school starts because I LOVE english :3
I'll shut up now. . .

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DevaPein In reply to FlamingSpartanWolf [2010-08-06 06:55:05 +0000 UTC]

I couldn't write a better story because I was too sleepy and hungry xD
I was inspired to draw and write this story from listening to shippuden ost-26 xD

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FlamingSpartanWolf In reply to DevaPein [2010-08-07 16:31:35 +0000 UTC]

I thought the story was good. XD Naruto SHippuden as inspiration. . .
By the way, that was a comment from calm-emily.

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DevaPein In reply to FlamingSpartanWolf [2010-08-07 16:33:56 +0000 UTC]

Only music x)
Ohrly?

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FlamingSpartanWolf In reply to DevaPein [2010-08-07 16:46:09 +0000 UTC]

Oh XD
And yarly.

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DevaPein In reply to FlamingSpartanWolf [2010-08-07 16:56:17 +0000 UTC]

I've got inspiration for my story from "King Arthur" >.>
Dun believe.

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FlamingSpartanWolf In reply to DevaPein [2010-08-07 16:58:35 +0000 UTC]

King Arthur. . .
Never read it. . .
Or heard of it, actually. . .
I've heard of the GUY King Arthur, but not the book.

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DevaPein In reply to FlamingSpartanWolf [2010-08-07 17:14:04 +0000 UTC]

It's a movie o.o

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FlamingSpartanWolf In reply to DevaPein [2010-08-07 17:29:03 +0000 UTC]

Oh. . .
YOU SAID STORY, SO I THOGUHT BOOK. . . . .

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DevaPein In reply to FlamingSpartanWolf [2010-08-07 21:05:26 +0000 UTC]

I see..

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FlamingSpartanWolf In reply to DevaPein [2010-08-11 16:04:08 +0000 UTC]

I have awesome logic.

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GP863 [2010-08-05 23:05:36 +0000 UTC]

poor rat poor poor rat

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DevaPein In reply to GP863 [2010-08-06 06:55:33 +0000 UTC]

Life is cruel.

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ItachiXme [2010-08-05 23:03:25 +0000 UTC]

AWESOME PIC =3 I like the story too

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DevaPein In reply to ItachiXme [2010-08-06 06:58:11 +0000 UTC]

I would do better if I wasn't sleepy ._.

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ItachiXme In reply to DevaPein [2010-08-06 07:03:20 +0000 UTC]

lol I ussaly feel the same ^^

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DevaPein In reply to ItachiXme [2010-08-06 07:08:16 +0000 UTC]

You do?^::^

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ItachiXme In reply to DevaPein [2010-08-06 07:12:02 +0000 UTC]

yeah when I am tried I can't seem to write good...sometimes my art pays the price too

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DevaPein In reply to ItachiXme [2010-08-06 07:14:49 +0000 UTC]

It was 2.00am when I finished it.And I was hungry xD

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ItachiXme In reply to DevaPein [2010-08-06 07:31:35 +0000 UTC]

lol XD I get turst at night... but considering your story..I'm not serprised XD

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DevaPein In reply to ItachiXme [2010-08-06 07:40:44 +0000 UTC]

Heh xD

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DemonfoxKyubi [2010-08-05 22:48:23 +0000 UTC]

nice

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DevaPein In reply to DemonfoxKyubi [2010-08-05 22:50:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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mintwinter [2010-08-05 22:46:17 +0000 UTC]

круто он за хвост дерану хД

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DevaPein In reply to mintwinter [2010-08-05 22:46:59 +0000 UTC]

А то хД

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mintwinter In reply to DevaPein [2010-08-05 22:49:08 +0000 UTC]

xDDDD

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DevaPein In reply to mintwinter [2010-08-05 22:50:17 +0000 UTC]

x))

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