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Devathi — Broken
Published: 2007-08-05 17:55:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 480; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 5
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Another dream. Another illusion. The softest sigh. The fleeting shadow of a smile. One look into your bottomless brown eyes. Transported back to reality. Another heartache. A rolling tear. This is goodbye, I love you dear.Related content
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hmmmm...i like this a lot, because if you look at piece by piece, its like random, but as a "whole" it makes perfect sense. you did a great job on portraying stops on a journey we all go through at least once in our life
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Hehe.. yes it is random, very. But that's the way my thoughts flow.. very randomly!!
Thank you for the prettiful comment!!
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well, as long as its not predictable, haha
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and you're totally right, pain is beautiful. not that i'm sadistic or anything, but to agree with you, the hurt kind of opens your eyes. makes you appreciate and value things more, i suppose. 
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Yep.. truly an eye-opener!! If you've been hurt deeply, you tend to perceive and understand the pain that others around you are going through much better.... Thankee for the 
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Oh.. I already thanked you once before! Lol.. forgot!!
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Yayyy.. and thankee for the
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i love the way you've conveyed so much with so few words! beautifully written
this would make a perfect ending for a tragic story
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Yayyyy...!!!!! 
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